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crucify and label you a liar
tattoo your every sin into your flesh
and watch the tangled webs you weave enmesh

what if she knew the worst you`ve ever done?
would she still stand by your side or just run?
what if I could play back every moment?
rip away those glasses with the rose tint

trip the emergency siren
scream at you `til I`m crying
put all our damage on display
breathe in deep of heart decay
this darkness is enveloping
a darker me developing
skin is slowly crumbling
alone and I am stumbling
don`t really wanna watch you burn
from vantage points of no return
it`s just so hard to be alone
when you`re the only one alone [comments] => 5 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 6 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

What If I...

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 27th February 2018 @ 09:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

what if I wanted to set you on fire?
crucify and label you a liar
tattoo your every sin into your flesh
and watch the tangled webs you weave enmesh

what if she knew the worst you`ve ever done?
would she still stand by your side or just run?
what if I could play back every moment?
rip away those glasses with the rose tint

trip the emergency siren
scream at you `til I`m crying
put all our damage on display
breathe in deep of heart decay
this darkness is enveloping
a darker me developing
skin is slowly crumbling
alone and I am stumbling
don`t really wanna watch you burn
from vantage points of no return
it`s just so hard to be alone
when you`re the only one alone

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2018-02-27 21:47:57]
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Re: What If I... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th February 2018 @ 08:16:29 AM AEST
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I know it/'/s bee awhile but u r just spitting out masterpiece/'/s.
hugs,
emy

Re: What If I... (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 1st March 2018 @ 12:08:37 AM AEST
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The last line is stunning and hits with quite a punch. Who among us has not dreamed of hacking someone to shreds?
You have given us a chance to revenge along with you, an by so doing, forgiven us our trespasses!
It is a comfort to know we are not alone in our moments of utter insanity!
softerware

Re: What If I... (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 3rd March 2018 @ 02:11:46 AM AEST
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what if I wanted to set you on fire.....
I laughed so hard
love this so much.....

Re: What If I... (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Monday, 5th March 2018 @ 11:33:29 PM AEST
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Moonlite, great write. Love the words!

Re: What If I... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 03:24:32 PM AEST
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...//Some//times? Oops, maybe I should scale it back ... :P

I was so glad I was finished my coffee before I read that first line about fire. Lol! I wouldve had a mess to clean up.
Something about the tattooing had me picturing this sinner running out of flesh to brand. In other words, great visual way to vent emotion.
Everything just came to a still with that ending though ... ouch.

Many hugs.

~Scorp

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