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[title] => Flower Field
[time] => 2018-07-05 01:29:11
[hometext] => Hillside
[bodytext] => Flowers like a rainbow; spread across the fields;
Blanket of a stormy sky; come to be revealed.
Bobbing in the gentle winds; swaying in one chorus;
Tiny costumed dancers; bowing down before us.
Whisper lofty treetops; in synchronized ovation.
The tall pines nod; on clouds the gods; acknowledge their creation.
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Flower Field
Contributed by
softerware
on
Thursday, 5th July 2018 @ 01:29:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Flowers like a rainbow; spread across the fields;
Blanket of a stormy sky; come to be revealed.
Bobbing in the gentle winds; swaying in one chorus;
Tiny costumed dancers; bowing down before us.
Whisper lofty treetops; in synchronized ovation.
The tall pines nod; on clouds the gods; acknowledge their creation.
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Re: Flower Field
(User Rating: 1 ) by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 5th July 2018 @ 10:21:02 PM AEST (User
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i love it. i wanna go for a walk in a forest.
please keep at it |
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Re: Flower Field
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 6th July 2018 @ 08:37:52 AM AEST (User
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this does make one wanna go it
and just gaze at the wonders of life
Birds Flowers Clouds
ahhh so nice |
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Re: Flower Field
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 10th July 2018 @ 09:22:31 PM AEST (User
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short and sweet! very rhythmic. lovely imagery. |
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Re: Flower Field
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Monday, 11th February 2019 @ 12:58:29 AM AEST (User
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Lovely imagery and cadence, the staccato final advice a satisfying signoff - not just observation and admiration, but celebration and accolations.
S. |
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Re: Flower Field
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 09:25:37 AM AEST (User
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this is very good beautiful |
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