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Array ( [sid] => 185256 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My heaven [time] => 2018-07-05 22:03:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => my heaven be filled with the sweetest of things
that does not age

my heaven have love all around
with no chance of pain and loss

may my heaven be filled with hopes and dreams
that doesn/'/t take ages to have come true

may my heaven have some many things
that leaving it would feel like committing the worst crime of all time

may my heaven have a place for just me
that it makes it hard to be sad upon

a heaven where smiles and love happen without effort

that/'/s my heaven

a place where earth isn/'/t worth any trips to make for [comments] => 2 [counter] => 114 [topic] => 61 [informant] => PreciousKitten [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

My heaven

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Thursday, 5th July 2018 @ 10:03:50 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

my heaven be filled with the sweetest of things
that does not age

my heaven have love all around
with no chance of pain and loss

may my heaven be filled with hopes and dreams
that doesn/'/t take ages to have come true

may my heaven have some many things
that leaving it would feel like committing the worst crime of all time

may my heaven have a place for just me
that it makes it hard to be sad upon

a heaven where smiles and love happen without effort

that/'/s my heaven

a place where earth isn/'/t worth any trips to make for

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2018-07-05 22:03:50]
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Re: My heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Friday, 6th July 2018 @ 12:08:42 AM AEST
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Never heard heaven described as a place where wishes come true. But why not? In fact, I hope you are correct; your heaven sounds wonderful.
Delay your journey as long as possible: we enjoy your poetry!
softerware

Re: My heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th July 2018 @ 07:38:23 AM AEST
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this is a genuine,
thought out, heaven,
in a glance,

I agree, heaven,
I could never figure
what it might be like.

so outward bound you go,
without a sound, the tip
of your tongue, the top of
ones lungs, never clammoring
for anything better,
and never worrying
about the journey
as you move on,
forever ---
and no, it does not feel sad
It feels, right

Peace!

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