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Perhaps We Should Conspire
Contributed by
allforyou
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Monday, 17th September 2018 @ 04:19:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wouldn/'/t mind,
spending a night,
around a burning fire.
Just you and I,
in flickering light,
with all of our desire
And should we find,
we cannot fight,
perhaps we should conspire.
Your eyes, like mine,
say that we might,
just raise our heartbeats higher.
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allforyou
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2018-09-17 04:19:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Perhaps We Should Conspire
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 12:09:34 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful delicious innuendo -- leaves the reader to finish the piece. Did they consummate their desire? Suffice to say, I want a cigarette.
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Re: Perhaps We Should Conspire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 10:41:45 AM AEST (User
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Very beautiful poem thank you!
As for the apostrophe, my suggestion is to use this
➡`. Just a thought. Looks more like an apostrophe.
There`s always announcements and help in the forums.
Here`s a link for this particular problem:
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Forums&file=viewtopic&t=6492
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Re: Perhaps We Should Conspire
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 25th September 2018 @ 06:03:11 AM AEST (User
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ooh this leaves me wanting to know more! haha
very nicely done |
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Re: Perhaps We Should Conspire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Frecks on
Tuesday, 25th September 2018 @ 12:36:21 PM AEST (User
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Lovely poem. I love how it flows. Beautifully written. |
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