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[aid] => mick
[title] => Discover
[time] => 2018-09-28 08:58:32
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[bodytext] => Would you let
your self Discover
How you got
Lost
along the way
to a place
you could Recover
from the pain
you feel Today
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Discover
Contributed by
drone
on
Friday, 28th September 2018 @ 08:58:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Would you let
your self Discover
How you got
Lost
along the way
to a place
you could Recover
from the pain
you feel Today
Copyright ©
drone
... [
2018-09-28 08:58:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Discover
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Friday, 28th September 2018 @ 08:14:27 PM AEST (User
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So short and sweet! I love the way this whole thing just rolls right off the tongue. In the beginning of this you have captured the absolute essence of every human who has been through any amount of pain in their lives by saying, "would you LET YOUR SELF discover.." I relate to this so much because I am still not even sure if I have allowed myself to open up all the way back to the beginning where I first got lost...It takes way more vulnerability to trace it back to the true root cause of all our pain. that is why so many never fully recover. |
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Re: Discover
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 29th September 2018 @ 05:55:57 PM AEST (User
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This should be posted in every counselors office no matter what the treatment was for.
Ironic that you choose the name DRONE, which implies just the opposite of your splendid compositions!
I love your style!
softerware |
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