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Array ( [sid] => 18549 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Glass Teardrop [time] => 2003-06-04 16:05:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She walked with clumsy rythm
Her lips were full of melody
She spun around and hit the ground
Her knee fell in harms way
Her tears were streaming steady
She called out to me for help
I knelt beside her aching knee
And planted a kiss upon the pain
She took my hand inside of hers
We stared up at the clouds
And then she started spouting
Off words I don't quite understand

I have loved you for my whole life
And I'll love you for the rest
And if some day my eyes do close
I'll love you in my death
I give you something mommie
That I hold dearest to my heart
It leads the way into my soul
And to my deepest depths
So take this present mommie
As I give it to your freely
Please hold on tight don't let go
Of my teardrop made of glass

She let go of my hand
And stood her tiny body up
With a gift of a moochie
She ran back to playing
Spinning and singing
The rest of the day away
I opened up my shaking hand
To find the gift she'd left
And there between the life lines
Sat a clear marble made of glass... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 367 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Lia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Glass Teardrop

Contributed by Lia on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



She walked with clumsy rythm
Her lips were full of melody
She spun around and hit the ground
Her knee fell in harms way
Her tears were streaming steady
She called out to me for help
I knelt beside her aching knee
And planted a kiss upon the pain
She took my hand inside of hers
We stared up at the clouds
And then she started spouting
Off words I don't quite understand

I have loved you for my whole life
And I'll love you for the rest
And if some day my eyes do close
I'll love you in my death
I give you something mommie
That I hold dearest to my heart
It leads the way into my soul
And to my deepest depths
So take this present mommie
As I give it to your freely
Please hold on tight don't let go
Of my teardrop made of glass

She let go of my hand
And stood her tiny body up
With a gift of a moochie
She ran back to playing
Spinning and singing
The rest of the day away
I opened up my shaking hand
To find the gift she'd left
And there between the life lines
Sat a clear marble made of glass...




Copyright © Lia ... [ 2003-06-04 16:05:00]
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Re: Glass Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:30:27 PM AEST
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very touching write. Thanks for sharing.
Michelle


Re: Glass Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST
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Ohh Lia..this is so beautiful...and so touching...
Jenni


Re: Glass Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:23:58 PM AEST
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shelby and jenni took the words right out of my mouth...


Re: Glass Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:50:55 PM AEST
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Hi Lia,
A very moving poem. Touched my heart for sure.
Regards,
Ramfire


Re: Glass Teardrop (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:39:12 PM AEST
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That was beautiful. it even made me cry.
Always
Amy




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