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[sid] => 185517
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => To Never Know
[time] => 2018-10-11 02:18:35
[hometext] => Can we ever know if how we feel is how others feel?
[bodytext] => My wings beat,
nakedly,
flap for flap for flock;
air rails, lifts until
with a million other wings
the drift slaps us all,
never knowing as
slap for slap
they feel what I feel in the fall.
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[counter] => 66
[topic] => 62
[informant] => invierno
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To Never Know
Contributed by
invierno
on
Thursday, 11th October 2018 @ 02:18:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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My wings beat,
nakedly,
flap for flap for flock;
air rails, lifts until
with a million other wings
the drift slaps us all,
never knowing as
slap for slap
they feel what I feel in the fall.
Copyright ©
invierno
... [
2018-10-11 02:18:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: To Never Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Thursday, 11th October 2018 @ 02:37:23 AM AEST (User
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We look alike; act alike, and have the same basic needs (food, shelter, safety)..but we are not alike inside. Why do we take each other for granted?
How vain to think everyone thinks as I do!
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Re: To Never Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 11th October 2018 @ 02:50:40 PM AEST (User
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Interesting...made me think of birds flying in a v up in the sky with me being the one bird lagging behind because I could not handle the slap slap of the drift. |
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Re: To Never Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th October 2018 @ 09:13:42 AM AEST (User
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the flap is quite unique any bird
would know without seeing a face
or hearing a voice,
a creak in the floor made from a ghost,
only another ghost knew was true
in this ether, in this mist
that confuses one and all
that exists
there is a list of things to be
taken for granted
and then there is list of a lot
of things that have never been
identified as being positively
identified as being true
you are true
to a fault
seismically speaking
or at least some day
the probability is high
that you will be
Peace!
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