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Array ( [sid] => 1857 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walk away [time] => 2002-08-06 13:44:46 [hometext] => This is realy wearing me down.... [bodytext] => I try to talk to you...
And you walk away.

I tell you that I love you and you say you love me too.
But still... you walk away.

You teel me that you've just been under stress... that it's nothing I did. But when I try to help... you walk away.

You still introduce me as your boyfriend. but when we're alone.... you walk away.

I try every thing I can think of to try and save our relation ship... and you turn you back on me.

I give you space and stop asking all these questions... stop trying so much... because you ask me to...
and you are angry at me for it.

you tell me you love me...
So why do I feel like I'm nothing to you?
I as if you still want to be with me...

You walk away [comments] => 6 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 39 [informant] => cypher [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Walk away

Contributed by cypher on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 01:44:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I try to talk to you...
And you walk away.

I tell you that I love you and you say you love me too.
But still... you walk away.

You teel me that you've just been under stress... that it's nothing I did. But when I try to help... you walk away.

You still introduce me as your boyfriend. but when we're alone.... you walk away.

I try every thing I can think of to try and save our relation ship... and you turn you back on me.

I give you space and stop asking all these questions... stop trying so much... because you ask me to...
and you are angry at me for it.

you tell me you love me...
So why do I feel like I'm nothing to you?
I as if you still want to be with me...

You walk away

Copyright © cypher ... [ 2002-08-06 13:44:46]
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Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by spaceotter on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 02:14:38 PM AEST
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If this is based on real life, here goes: I was this way towards my wife for awhile. There were a lot of things I had to deal with whithin myself. And they were clogging up my emotions. Sometimes something pains you so much that everything else seems grey. Even when you know it's not. Good Luck!

Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by chatabox on Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 08:36:55 PM AEST
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well its not fair on you being treated like this, but have you found out why she is under such stress. Perhaps write her letter or show her this poem, it might make her realsie how much you are hurting too.

Good luck.

Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 02:34:20 AM AEST
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This possition I have been in recently. I am sad to say mine didn't work out... I hope and pray for you that you find the way back into her arms. But there is only one path... COMMUNICATION. good luck my friend.

Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by Shayle on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 12:16:02 PM AEST
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I know how you feel...sometimes no matter what you do to help or be there for a person they still walk away....great write!:) ~Shayle~

Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 03:58:57 PM AEST
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let her walk away, she's entitled to, she will either come back or she wont, at least you'll know, she obviously wants some space.

Re: Walk away (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 11:27:11 PM AEST
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i can so identify with this poem, hugs nessa

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