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Trying To Change
Contributed by
drone
on
Monday, 14th January 2019 @ 12:31:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It is when
I Allow
My pain
My fear
My despair
from my past
to Control
my present
it is only then
that my future
will always rely
on my past
that I live
in the present
Every Day
Copyright ©
drone
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2019-01-14 12:31:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Trying To Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 14th January 2019 @ 09:42:54 PM AEST (User
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This circles around itself and comes back to the beginning. An effective way to make your point.
Experience is necessary, but old tapes are not always applicable to the present.
You have posted a warning.
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Re: Trying To Change
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Tuesday, 15th January 2019 @ 07:31:13 PM AEST (User
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I feel like when as a kid, I played the game where you hold a broom handle straight up above your head, then focus on it and spin around ten times. I GUARANTEE you won/'/t be able to remain standing.
Or, it/'/s a bit like the time past/future continuum.
But, the topic is weighty and you did a terrific job describing the confusion and fear the past can wreak upon the present whilst sowing seeds of fear for the future. Very well done, Sir or Madam.
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