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[title] => Hello
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[bodytext] => Years have passed yet I remember you fondly,
despite how it ended.
Your smile full of life, but I couldn/'/t help you.
Staring at the fire,
I see can/'/t help but see your face.
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Hello
Contributed by
mick
on
Tuesday, 15th January 2019 @ 12:20:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Years have passed yet I remember you fondly,
despite how it ended.
Your smile full of life, but I couldn/'/t help you.
Staring at the fire,
I see can/'/t help but see your face.
Copyright ©
mick
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2019-01-15 00:20:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 15th January 2019 @ 02:50:13 PM AEST (User
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I get it big time.
I live this myself but dreams and thoughts are void of the reality of the true situation. Once I meet them again it`s pure anxiety cause you know where it will go :) Charming write.
Then again...… The face in the fire however may mean something totally different... lol. Been there too. |
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Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 15th January 2019 @ 03:11:11 PM AEST (User
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To many I am still considered young but have
seen enough to long to have some of those years
back. Volumes spoke in so few words.
Rich |
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Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 09:12:37 AM AEST (User
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Very powerful writing.
peace
emy
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Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 17th January 2019 @ 07:19:59 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful.
ming |
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Re: Hello
(User Rating: 1 ) by Deidra_Carmichael on
Monday, 28th January 2019 @ 11:56:59 PM AEST (User
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Your words really spoke to me here. There are a few people that have been cut out of my life and for important reasons. Nevertheless, I still look with nostalgia at the memories I’ve shared with them all. A sad yet beautiful experience it is. Thank you for posting and God bless,
Deidra
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