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Array ( [sid] => 185806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yellow Dress On Tonight [time] => 2019-01-21 19:01:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You`ve got your yellow dress on tonight
See how it shimmers in the sparkling light
Got your blonde hair done up just right
Oh, oh, oh, what a beautiful sight

As I spin you round and round
All the guys on the dance floor
Know I`m the man of the night
Get out of our way
As we are about to take flight
Gonna dance our way
To the northern lights

As we dance on through the night
Everything feels so, so, right
Four feet as light as feathers
Cause we`re doing it so, so, right

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie


Dancing among the rest
Baby they all know you`re the best
Got your yellow dress on tonight
They all watch as it shimmers in the sparkling light


Let me kiss you before you go
Cause you`re someone I always wanted to know
When we will meet again
All you have to do is say when

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie...
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Notes
My spin on "Summertime Sadness" by "Lana Del Rey"

To be sung in the style of "Tommaso Pini" as done so on "The Voice Italy"

Dedicated to LPS... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 34 [informant] => jamesstockdale [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Yellow Dress On Tonight

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Monday, 21st January 2019 @ 07:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



You`ve got your yellow dress on tonight
See how it shimmers in the sparkling light
Got your blonde hair done up just right
Oh, oh, oh, what a beautiful sight

As I spin you round and round
All the guys on the dance floor
Know I`m the man of the night
Get out of our way
As we are about to take flight
Gonna dance our way
To the northern lights

As we dance on through the night
Everything feels so, so, right
Four feet as light as feathers
Cause we`re doing it so, so, right

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie


Dancing among the rest
Baby they all know you`re the best
Got your yellow dress on tonight
They all watch as it shimmers in the sparkling light


Let me kiss you before you go
Cause you`re someone I always wanted to know
When we will meet again
All you have to do is say when

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie

Oh my God
I feel so alive
Oh my God
You got me under your spell
Oh my God
Tell me this isn`t a lie...
.......................................................
........................................................
.................................................................................
Notes
My spin on "Summertime Sadness" by "Lana Del Rey"

To be sung in the style of "Tommaso Pini" as done so on "The Voice Italy"

Dedicated to LPS...




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Re: Yellow Dress On Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Tuesday, 22nd January 2019 @ 02:27:50 PM AEST
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Well, I can/'/t say I know either of those songs but I did have my own little song and rhythm I could put it to and I enjoy that :)


Re: Yellow Dress On Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 23rd January 2019 @ 01:35:48 PM AEST
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I definitely caught a Lana Del Rey vibe while reading! You’ve done quite well with this rendition (dare I say I like it better than the original?). Splendid work here: your poem gives me hope in having that perfect dance with that special someone. Take care and be blessed,

Deidra


Re: Yellow Dress On Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 23rd January 2019 @ 10:30:00 PM AEST
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What a merry spin across the floor! Your telling us how to pitch romance to music, and the feeling of floating is dizzying!
Your poem is a CinderFella tale , and he hopes it not a dream.
Writing it to fit a song has set a template to control the meter of each stanza, and I love the result. Your write is musical!
Bravo, James!
softerware


Re: Yellow Dress On Tonight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th February 2019 @ 09:52:35 AM AEST
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Wow, Jimmy. I finally got the time to read this along with Tommaso Pini singing and then reading with the sound now familiar in my cranium.

You did really great on this!!! Damn amazing.




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