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Paradise
Contributed by
starshine
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Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Palm trees and ripples of water
the breeze cause them to stir
The sands are calm
The people gone
The chilled air makes me shudder.
Darkness falls but the moon glows
adding light of an earthy color
I close my eyes and feel
the peace this island has to offer
a depth of calm casts over me as sun begins to rise
the day consumes my body like an urchin on the rise
a new days sun will warm me
as palm trees gently stir
my mind will drift so far away
as the clear blue water does
Vacations almost over, but the calmness will live on
For once you feel this splendor
Paradise will live on.
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2003-06-05 19:35:00]
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Re: Paradise
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 09:25:47 PM AEST
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A beautiful picture youpainted for me. We haven't been to hawaii and Alaska yet then all 50 will be covered.This beautiful poem makes me want to get there real soon.
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Re: Paradise
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by venkat on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 04:48:02 AM AEST
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| I agree with shelby's comment.. a good paint. venkat |
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Re: Paradise
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by starshine on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:06:38 PM AEST
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hi shelby- you paid a wonderful compliment ;)
Looking forward to your poem after your hawaii visit (hope its in the very near future).
thanks- |
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