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Array ( [sid] => 18729 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2003-06-07 14:05:00 [hometext] => It's been a while, but here I am. I didn't get around to thinking of a name for this poem, so I left it untitled.. for now. It's about being with somebody who makes you feel like you are a beautiful person. Something Im sure most of us can relate to. Im not sure why I wrote it from the females point of view, but anyway, here it is. [bodytext] => Raining outside
she stands at the window
wrapped up in her sheets
smiling, feeling complete.

She ignores her reflection
as her fingers follow the raindrops
cascading down the glass,
her past creeps in
vivid memories sink in.

Now, looking straight at herself
her eyes submerge with tears
as she recalls
looking in the mirror
and seeing a lost, ugly girl.

Her angels arms find their way
around her shaking body
holding her tight from behind
his lips caress her neck
she sighs and closes her eyes.

with silence and a pause
enough time to collect thoughts
.......

she opens her eyes,
again, she looks at her reflection
and wiping away tears
(she smiles)
for the form of
true beauty in her eyes
is only present
in the heart of united lovers. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => EmptyWords [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Untitled

Contributed by EmptyWords on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Raining outside
she stands at the window
wrapped up in her sheets
smiling, feeling complete.

She ignores her reflection
as her fingers follow the raindrops
cascading down the glass,
her past creeps in
vivid memories sink in.

Now, looking straight at herself
her eyes submerge with tears
as she recalls
looking in the mirror
and seeing a lost, ugly girl.

Her angels arms find their way
around her shaking body
holding her tight from behind
his lips caress her neck
she sighs and closes her eyes.

with silence and a pause
enough time to collect thoughts
.......

she opens her eyes,
again, she looks at her reflection
and wiping away tears
(she smiles)
for the form of
true beauty in her eyes
is only present
in the heart of united lovers.




Copyright © EmptyWords ... [ 2003-06-07 14:05:00]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:05:42 PM AEST
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true beauty only comes from within, we are blessed when we find someone who not only sees this beauty but brings it out..good write
Shari


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
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a beautiful sentiment...you write expressively and with clarity. it interesting to take on the perspective of someone else and you've done it well here. great write, keep them coming, Kate x


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:14:50 PM AEST
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this is a good poem very good writtin
Amanda ( spoiledbrat )




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