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Array ( [sid] => 18730 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Unfinished Dreams [time] => 2003-06-07 14:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem quite a while ago...and recently came across it. Some people live to make their fantasy reality...while others try to make their reality their fantasy... [bodytext] => How do you make me laugh
when I most feel like crying?
My heart is full of love for you
My soul is slowly dying.

I want a future with you
I have since way back when
But you are unable to commit to me
My love…this needs to end

There is a road block up ahead…
One you don’t want to miss
Your fantasy means more than me
You’d rather have your tryst

it’s somewhere in the future
Not today or tomorrow
But it will one day be reality
From Time I cannot borrow

You make me smile - I feel so cherished
When I’m wrapped tightly in your arms
As you look deep into my eyes
I fall victim to your charms

You’ve taught me to love myself
And to give my heart away
I need to take it back from you now
And let you have your way

You fulfilled my wishes
You were my dream come true
My happily ever after
Was not meant to be with you

We gave it all we had
Your slipper of glass just doesn’t fit
I will surely miss your smile…
Your amazing eyes, your wit

I want the castle, the fairytale
The white horse…the romance
My dreams are too precious to me
To leave it up to chance

SO good luck and farewell…
I will hold you close inside
And with a tear and a smile
My love…….I say goodbye.
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Unfinished Dreams

Contributed by Xoirishxo on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



How do you make me laugh
when I most feel like crying?
My heart is full of love for you
My soul is slowly dying.

I want a future with you
I have since way back when
But you are unable to commit to me
My love…this needs to end

There is a road block up ahead…
One you don’t want to miss
Your fantasy means more than me
You’d rather have your tryst

it’s somewhere in the future
Not today or tomorrow
But it will one day be reality
From Time I cannot borrow

You make me smile - I feel so cherished
When I’m wrapped tightly in your arms
As you look deep into my eyes
I fall victim to your charms

You’ve taught me to love myself
And to give my heart away
I need to take it back from you now
And let you have your way

You fulfilled my wishes
You were my dream come true
My happily ever after
Was not meant to be with you

We gave it all we had
Your slipper of glass just doesn’t fit
I will surely miss your smile…
Your amazing eyes, your wit

I want the castle, the fairytale
The white horse…the romance
My dreams are too precious to me
To leave it up to chance

SO good luck and farewell…
I will hold you close inside
And with a tear and a smile
My love…….I say goodbye.




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Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:03:21 PM AEST
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words so beautifully woven together
Shari


Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 11:42:20 AM AEST
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This is such a beautifully written poem yet so sad, my heart goes out to you.


Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:46:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem!! Being torn with such feelings and emotions is always very difficult to do, but saying goodbye when you don't want to in your heart is the worst! Love this poem!!
Christopher


Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:10:09 PM AEST
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very beautiful and moving poem, they don't make those glass slippers like they used to lol, do they? i hope you find one who can make you happy and fullfill all of your dreams, as your soul is so lovely, hugs n' love nessa


Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by stargazer on Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:12:51 AM AEST
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This was so beautifully said. My heart goes out to you. I know how difficult it is to say goodbye to someone you love... its not an easy task. I wish you luck in whatever shall happen.

-Amy


Re: Unfinished Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Bubbles420 on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 04:00:57 PM AEST
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I love this poem! You speak of a feeling so many of us feel, and put it into words in a way most of us can not. Well done!




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