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it really burn when i'm thinking talking and breaving without you it really make me suffer the concenquences when i can just walk into the days of the yong breaving love imotions but can you feel it too i just can't denie my feelings to you it makes me feel the beauty of the life when i'm with you but at one day it's all have beng totaly erased out of my life but a one depression and one emotional feeling it have beng out of my life when it have beng gone of my staring sky it really makes it gone when i meet you let me all alone but when i get to you you let me in your heart at the end you make it more good but at the eternity you have beng tearing it apart and no matter that i did i felt of pain and crushed by a unfakable light of your shadow eyes see the problem i loved you but you maked me lost you . [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 32 [informant] => wassim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

it really burn!

Contributed by wassim on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

IT REALLY BURN
it really burn when i'm thinking talking and breaving without you it really make me suffer the concenquences when i can just walk into the days of the yong breaving love imotions but can you feel it too i just can't denie my feelings to you it makes me feel the beauty of the life when i'm with you but at one day it's all have beng totaly erased out of my life but a one depression and one emotional feeling it have beng out of my life when it have beng gone of my staring sky it really makes it gone when i meet you let me all alone but when i get to you you let me in your heart at the end you make it more good but at the eternity you have beng tearing it apart and no matter that i did i felt of pain and crushed by a unfakable light of your shadow eyes see the problem i loved you but you maked me lost you .

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Re: it really burn! (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 03:03:46 PM AEST
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To write with such depth of feeling in a language not your own makes your message
very powerfull

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