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Array ( [sid] => 1905 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take me away [time] => 2002-08-07 13:32:12 [hometext] => This poem is for all of you who have ever had feelings for someone who already has someone who does them wrong. You want them so bad you can't stand it! So I wrote all those feelings down....but I don't feel that way now. [bodytext] => I see you almost everyday
and still I find it hard to find the right words to say
I see walk with the guys
and when I look at you I see all you are in your eyes
I know you don't cheat or spread lies
When you walk by me my heart goes crazy
It's as if I can't breathe when you look at me
You're with this other girl
and I can't believe you say she's your world
She lies to you and talks behind your back
Something I'd never do I'd stay on track
She has got you so blind that you can't see
everything you're searching for you can find in me
I know she doesn't make you happy
I'll never know why you just want let her be
and stop and look at me
and see that I will never lie to you
I'm a girl who will be true
I'll never let you down or fool around
Why won't you set her on her way
So you can find happiness another day
So...you can be with me
I promise you I'll treat you right
We'll be together forever we'll never fight
All you have to do is say
I love you and please take me away
I'll take you where the oceans blue
I'll fly to the edge of the universe for you
There's nothing I want do
I want you to take me away
to find a better day
Take me away to another place
Where I can see a smile on everyones face
All I want you to do is take me away
listen to the sweet words that I say
I'll love you forever everyday
and I promise you baby I'll take you away
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Sweetie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Take me away

Contributed by Sweetie on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 01:32:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I see you almost everyday
and still I find it hard to find the right words to say
I see walk with the guys
and when I look at you I see all you are in your eyes
I know you don't cheat or spread lies
When you walk by me my heart goes crazy
It's as if I can't breathe when you look at me
You're with this other girl
and I can't believe you say she's your world
She lies to you and talks behind your back
Something I'd never do I'd stay on track
She has got you so blind that you can't see
everything you're searching for you can find in me
I know she doesn't make you happy
I'll never know why you just want let her be
and stop and look at me
and see that I will never lie to you
I'm a girl who will be true
I'll never let you down or fool around
Why won't you set her on her way
So you can find happiness another day
So...you can be with me
I promise you I'll treat you right
We'll be together forever we'll never fight
All you have to do is say
I love you and please take me away
I'll take you where the oceans blue
I'll fly to the edge of the universe for you
There's nothing I want do
I want you to take me away
to find a better day
Take me away to another place
Where I can see a smile on everyones face
All I want you to do is take me away
listen to the sweet words that I say
I'll love you forever everyday
and I promise you baby I'll take you away




Copyright © Sweetie ... [ 2002-08-07 13:32:12]
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Re: Take me away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 01:40:46 PM AEST
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Lovely write!! I'm glad you no longer feel this way.....
Jenni




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