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Array ( [sid] => 19146 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Aftermath [time] => 2003-06-17 01:05:00 [hometext] => this poem was written right after my best friend was killed. i felt like it was my fault. [bodytext] => Aftermath
I am trapped back here again
where i didnt want to be
turned cynical to all thats good
trying to change reality
i fill myself with this regret
i cant stop living the mistake
can i blame you for all this pain?
for all the lies you chose to make.
I dont deseve, I can not trust
It was ripped away from me,
So ashamed,
the guilt,
the pain,
everything is so deranged.
I want to cut my life away,
fill all my hurt with blood and rage
to watch the crimson slowly drip
to take myself and watch me fade
i stained the floor with my red tears
of overwhelming worthless pride
you ***** sink inside my mind
theres no where left for me to hide
I dont deserve, I can not trust
It was ripped away from me,
so ashamed,
the guilt,
the pain,
everything is so deranged.
I am alone now, no ones here
theres no one left to watch me fall
i ruined it all with ignorance
i expected too much after all
and slowly scars begin to fade
just like they had done before
another test in which i failed
and i dont want you anymore.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 48 [informant] => threat2society [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Aftermath

Contributed by threat2society on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Aftermath
I am trapped back here again
where i didnt want to be
turned cynical to all thats good
trying to change reality
i fill myself with this regret
i cant stop living the mistake
can i blame you for all this pain?
for all the lies you chose to make.
I dont deseve, I can not trust
It was ripped away from me,
So ashamed,
the guilt,
the pain,
everything is so deranged.
I want to cut my life away,
fill all my hurt with blood and rage
to watch the crimson slowly drip
to take myself and watch me fade
i stained the floor with my red tears
of overwhelming worthless pride
you ***** sink inside my mind
theres no where left for me to hide
I dont deserve, I can not trust
It was ripped away from me,
so ashamed,
the guilt,
the pain,
everything is so deranged.
I am alone now, no ones here
theres no one left to watch me fall
i ruined it all with ignorance
i expected too much after all
and slowly scars begin to fade
just like they had done before
another test in which i failed
and i dont want you anymore.




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Re: Aftermath (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 01:55:35 AM AEST
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a touching write.Im sorry this happened and that you feel this way.
michelle


Re: Aftermath (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 12:19:18 PM AEST
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So sad,Sorry for your loss! Its never easy!
Christina




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