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Array ( [sid] => 19240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => finally relises [time] => 2003-06-18 14:05:00 [hometext] => just something i wrote [bodytext] => dark cold all alone
she sits there and cries to herself
thinking of how great life use to be
she thinks she is nothing
she thinks she is worthless
but in reality she is everything
she means the world to her family,
the world to her friends
if only she could see it.
she picks up her knife
slits her wrists and slits her throat
she slowly feels her world coming to an end.
her mum walks in and finds her lieing there
close to death.
she awakes the next day
to find her friends and family right by her side.
she starts to cry,
and relises she isnt nothing, she isnt worthless
but she is everything. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 261 [topic] => 36 [informant] => addicted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

finally relises

Contributed by addicted on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

dark cold all alone
she sits there and cries to herself
thinking of how great life use to be
she thinks she is nothing
she thinks she is worthless
but in reality she is everything
she means the world to her family,
the world to her friends
if only she could see it.
she picks up her knife
slits her wrists and slits her throat
she slowly feels her world coming to an end.
her mum walks in and finds her lieing there
close to death.
she awakes the next day
to find her friends and family right by her side.
she starts to cry,
and relises she isnt nothing, she isnt worthless
but she is everything.

Copyright © addicted ... [ 2003-06-18 14:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: finally relises (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:32:52 AM AEST
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touching write on a tough subject.
michelle

Re: finally relises (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 01:39:56 AM AEST
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wow this was so great. Most suicidal people don't realize ppl love them until after they attempt or right before they do. From there it is a long tough road. Thnx for writing this it is so amazing. Wow.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: finally relises (User Rating: 1 )
by MX on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:28:21 AM AEST
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man...that was written so well.
most people who write suicide poetry don't realize what you do...

loved it.

-MX-

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