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Array ( [sid] => 19346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Other Side [time] => 2003-06-20 16:05:00 [hometext] => About finding peace after death. [bodytext] => Feels like I'm loosing my mind,
I need a place to hide.
Somewhere, I know... life is fine.
Maybe I'll find ait on the other side.

Little voices inside my head.
Telling me how great it is to be dead.
A price is put on my head.
Another drop of blood is shed.

So I'll tie it in a velvet red bow.
And I'll put it on show.
How you hurt me, no one knows.
Because this silence, like a cancer grows.

Feels like I've lost my mind.
I found a place to hide.
Somewhere, I know... life is fine.
I found it on the other side. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bopeep [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Other Side

Contributed by bopeep on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Feels like I'm loosing my mind,
I need a place to hide.
Somewhere, I know... life is fine.
Maybe I'll find ait on the other side.

Little voices inside my head.
Telling me how great it is to be dead.
A price is put on my head.
Another drop of blood is shed.

So I'll tie it in a velvet red bow.
And I'll put it on show.
How you hurt me, no one knows.
Because this silence, like a cancer grows.

Feels like I've lost my mind.
I found a place to hide.
Somewhere, I know... life is fine.
I found it on the other side.

Copyright © bopeep ... [ 2003-06-20 16:05:00]
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Re: Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 07:19:52 PM AEST
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You write well, indeed..keep it up
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From the other side, I can't hear it ring
You know what you'll find, not a bloomin' thing
Now if I'M wrong, don't let it concern
if YOU make a mistake, you're there for etern.

Re: Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 08:12:05 PM AEST
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hey i loved this especially the first two lines keep on writing you definitely have a talent. Look forward to talking soon.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 20th June 2003 @ 08:15:35 PM AEST
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hey i loved this especially the first two lines keep on writing you definitely have a talent. Look forward to talking soon.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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Beautiful and dark, yet very sad, Bobeep you have got a nack for poetry keep it up, as I hope to read more of your work in the future.

Re: Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 06:35:50 PM AEST
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go go buffalo! this one is just as nice as the other! i like it.

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