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[title] => Blood-Stained Bed
[time] => 2003-06-26 17:25:00
[hometext] => If everything goes to plan this will be my last poem ever. Even though I don't know you, thank you all for just being there.
[bodytext] => Red reality stains
On a bed of true fantasy
Strawberry stripes on white skin
The blood of this, staining my imagination
Crimson flashes
This is my life
Blood
Like the blood on my mouth
That I cannot wipe away
This is me
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Blood-Stained Bed
Contributed by
aboutdesouffle
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Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Red reality stains
On a bed of true fantasy
Strawberry stripes on white skin
The blood of this, staining my imagination
Crimson flashes
This is my life
Blood
Like the blood on my mouth
That I cannot wipe away
This is me
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 05:36:33 PM AEST
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please, please don't go yet.. i've been there, it's not worth giving everything up... this poem is amazing, ypdc would be missing out so much if we couldn't read your poems!
if you do come back on here, pls, PM me if you need to talk, i'll reply asap.. please, just don't give up yet, keep holding on, keep fighting hunni...
afraid_of_fear (aka charlotte) x_x_x |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 05:54:03 PM AEST
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Please don't give up yet...Please PM me, give me a chance to try to help you before you give up everything, your whole life! I know how it is to want to give up, I've been there, i've tried it myself, believe me, don't try just yet. Give life another chance.....Pm me, please
Extra hugs and love-Lisa |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by squeesh on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:01:22 PM AEST
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hey i know i dont know you but trust me ive been there b4 i know everyone says that to make you feel better but ive had people close to me die and people i didnt really know die and it sucks i dont know what your situation is but just get some help talk to your friends or someone that can get you the help you need no matter who you are you should always feel good about yourself and be able to stay away from the knife or however you are planning to 'end' it all just please hang in there and if you need to talk to someone im usually on here pm me or talk to any of these other kind people im sure someone will be able to help you
great big hug and kiss to you
~squeesh |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 06:17:10 PM AEST
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So many have felt that way I too have been so close, but it is not worth it. Do you really think that will end the hurt? What if it now lasts for an eternity and you can't escape that by death?
Shari |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 07:52:44 PM AEST
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Please don't give up... life may seem down in the dumps and not worth living right now to you... I felt that for a long while too but I stuck it out and things are looking really good for me now
Your time will come too... trust me... |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by kangarose on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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| Although I don't know you and this is the first poem I have read here of yours.. everyone is calling out to you not to do it not to go to stay...Most people that have tried suicide and failed will give you advice the one thing is that no one has been exactly where you are right now....I have felt this way and many of us here have many of us have tried suicide and failed.. some one has brought us back from where we wanted to go or at the time thought we wanted to go... the choice is your though in the end, you are the only one that can really grasp up and pull yourself out from under the rock you feel has fallen onto you right now.. sounds to me you have many admirers here of your work.. sounds like your going tobe losing far more than just your life if you choose the fate you have planned for yourself... think of all the many more great friendships you can make right here on YPDC... give yourself the chance and grab life by the throat... give it your all or you will never know what greatness would have been yours... as I said its up to you and I hope you are strong enough to stay and share with us all your thoughts and views on life. We've all been hurt from time to time but life is what we choose to make it. I have written about unhappiness in my life under this nick and under the nick chrissylee..Lost innocence and A walk in My shoes... and there are many more there about my hurts and pains in life. I don't want you to comment on them thats not the reason for me guiding you there I want you to read them and realise you are not the only one in this world that has ever been hurt... we all hurt we all cry we all bleed... but don't you go bleeding to end your life stay and write your pain out i find its always helped me....Great poem don't let it be your last!!!!! |
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Re: Blood-Stained Bed
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 09:35:33 PM AEST
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plz don't go...becos I know...it's the greatest sin...rather you believe in heaven or hell you will someday becos we'll all be somewhere...so keep this in mind...rather you have faith or think it's a bunch of crap I’ll pray for you nE ways and I know you'll soon see some better days...remember the most important person loves you very much and will never let you down...THE FATHER AND THE SON IS WITH YOU...and much love
paryars from cassie |
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