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Array ( [sid] => 19672 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the beach [time] => 2003-06-28 05:35:00 [hometext] => hi all,
i just thought as seeing as i have only wrote a couple of poems i would add a lovey dovey one for you romancers!!
hope you like it and yet again feedback is very welcome!!
thanks [bodytext] => As the waves slowly eat away at the shore
and the sand falls between my toes
i see you in the distance
and all the air around me slows

The wind slowly comes to a holt
the tide stands still for a while
as i slowly walk towards you
my dry mouth drawing into a smile

As i near your slender body
i smell your sweetness in the air
the smell of your skin so soft
the smell of your long dark curly hair

I am here right now beside you
holding my hand out towards your hand
your clasp is oh so tight on me
as you pull me down onto the sand

And then a gaze is held in our eyes
and we smile as our lips slowly meet
and we lay there engrossed in our love
the sea gently lapping at our feet

Michelle Louise Trickett [comments] => 3 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 2 [informant] => gothgal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
the beach

Contributed by gothgal on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



As the waves slowly eat away at the shore
and the sand falls between my toes
i see you in the distance
and all the air around me slows

The wind slowly comes to a holt
the tide stands still for a while
as i slowly walk towards you
my dry mouth drawing into a smile

As i near your slender body
i smell your sweetness in the air
the smell of your skin so soft
the smell of your long dark curly hair

I am here right now beside you
holding my hand out towards your hand
your clasp is oh so tight on me
as you pull me down onto the sand

And then a gaze is held in our eyes
and we smile as our lips slowly meet
and we lay there engrossed in our love
the sea gently lapping at our feet

Michelle Louise Trickett




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Re: the beach (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 09:17:05 AM AEST
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very nice, good write
Shari


Re: the beach (User Rating: 1 )
by EyesRustedShut on Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 08:50:03 PM AEST
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Hey I like this poem..... In a way it reminds me of a poem I wrote called "The Magical Kiss." Both the poems use many of the same words but in different places..... well keep up the good work

PS I thought your poem was gonna be dark cuz your name is gothgal "Goth" but it wasn't. It was really good.... If you like good music and you have some extra time check out the music of Monday In London at www.mondayinlondon.com


Re: the beach (User Rating: 1 )
by gothgal on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 04:00:29 PM AEST
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hi,thanks..i will be of course putting some dark poetry up soon but this was just done on a shall i say lighter day??!!i will check out your poem and compare.i dont like to stick to cliches so you just have to read my poems and some days youll get dark some happy,a lucky dip!
Shelley xx
p.s.will check out that site.thanks!




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