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Array ( [sid] => 1983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Block(out)side{r} [time] => 2002-08-08 20:57:25 [hometext] => This one is more of a conversation about writing blocks turned into poetry I guess, wasn't planned to be posted...oh well.

Note: Never give out your password or credit card number in an instant message conversation. [bodytext] => Any luck with penning anything out??

Vented out my frustrations... other than that, not a thing.

Mmm, it'll come back in it's own time I guess,
can't stay inside forever...just not enough room!

Not enough room for every thought that you have,
Not enough room for thoughts inside,
good thoughts or bad.

Not enough will to write as you do,
My writing is different, I thought that you knew...

I do know and I did,
Wish you could find it,
Back on the horse man,
Dig up the dirt Dan,
More of the vision, another hit,
or "take sleep" in the sandpit,
Whatever it takes, whatever,
Never cold climate, Never.

Days pine away dryer, laughs last a bit shorter,
All day I feel tired, most sheltered and cornered.

So smile, and spark fires,
forget the bother and dryness,
Dismiss tired, alive's the feeling,
Smash the corner and now you're healing!

Then what's this grimey ache that i'm feeling?

Good question, you're tested,
I've been it, seen it,
Sat through it, and cleaned it,
It's a ride, it's a trail,
It's a mountain, so climb it,
Can't sit around pining,
You are you, embrace it,
Wasting time is just wastage.

Then gooday sir I go,
I have to you know
not making a waste,
so leaving in haste…
but really, I must go now.

Ghosts,
Twice,
Regards.

(Damon and Daniel 02')

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Damon_Maynard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Block(out)side{r}

Contributed by Damon_Maynard on Thursday, 8th August 2002 @ 08:57:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Any luck with penning anything out??

Vented out my frustrations... other than that, not a thing.

Mmm, it'll come back in it's own time I guess,
can't stay inside forever...just not enough room!

Not enough room for every thought that you have,
Not enough room for thoughts inside,
good thoughts or bad.

Not enough will to write as you do,
My writing is different, I thought that you knew...

I do know and I did,
Wish you could find it,
Back on the horse man,
Dig up the dirt Dan,
More of the vision, another hit,
or "take sleep" in the sandpit,
Whatever it takes, whatever,
Never cold climate, Never.

Days pine away dryer, laughs last a bit shorter,
All day I feel tired, most sheltered and cornered.

So smile, and spark fires,
forget the bother and dryness,
Dismiss tired, alive's the feeling,
Smash the corner and now you're healing!

Then what's this grimey ache that i'm feeling?

Good question, you're tested,
I've been it, seen it,
Sat through it, and cleaned it,
It's a ride, it's a trail,
It's a mountain, so climb it,
Can't sit around pining,
You are you, embrace it,
Wasting time is just wastage.

Then gooday sir I go,
I have to you know
not making a waste,
so leaving in haste…
but really, I must go now.

Ghosts,
Twice,
Regards.

(Damon and Daniel 02')





Copyright © Damon_Maynard ... [ 2002-08-08 20:57:25]
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Re: Block(out)side{r} (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 08:14:47 AM AEST
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Hey you two...
Very nice write, whether it was meant to be a poem or not... now if only I could break mine (writer's block that is...) =:)

Always,
Dani


Re: Block(out)side{r} (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 11:12:58 PM AEST
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I've always read the work of both of you...commented on Daniel's more but not necessarily out of preference as I like a lot of what you both write. i don't pretend to understand it all though and so hold back on the comments....something to do with a big age difference I think. But I feel confident enough to recomment on this one...it's a pleasure to read for lots of reasons. Firstly, I am on the edge of writer's block and panicking and so relate to it. Secondly because your personalities shine through but compliment each other well and thirdly, because musically you've got it together.. magic.
...and Danny taught me to say Kudos!
Chrissie xx




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