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Array ( [sid] => 19869 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Beast [time] => 2003-07-03 09:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this a few years ago siting in math class. Its kinda chopy now, i cant remember all of it. At the time it felt good to write it. [bodytext] => The student changed deep inside
All the good within him died
His skin was torn, his bones they grew
His eyes took on a redish hue
Humanity gone, strength remains
Love he lost, rage he gains
Like frightned cows the normals scatter
He sees them run which doesnt matter
He's on the first with a leap
The normal lies in a bleeding heap
A second kick, the first is dead
He turns and palms anothers head
Forearm swells muscles bunch
The normal dies with a chrunch
Carnage follows terrors rule
The kid turned beast destroys his school [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 6 [informant] => calbob [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Beast

Contributed by calbob on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



The student changed deep inside
All the good within him died
His skin was torn, his bones they grew
His eyes took on a redish hue
Humanity gone, strength remains
Love he lost, rage he gains
Like frightned cows the normals scatter
He sees them run which doesnt matter
He's on the first with a leap
The normal lies in a bleeding heap
A second kick, the first is dead
He turns and palms anothers head
Forearm swells muscles bunch
The normal dies with a chrunch
Carnage follows terrors rule
The kid turned beast destroys his school




Copyright © calbob ... [ 2003-07-03 09:35:00]
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Re: Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:00:49 AM AEST
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compelling... another take on the school rage scenario, without guns or bombs... very imaginative... blessings...


Re: Beast (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:47:12 PM AEST
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Writing is a great outlet, this was well done
Shari




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