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Array ( [sid] => 19870 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Reason To Stay [time] => 2003-07-03 10:05:00 [hometext] => there's nothing to say... [bodytext] => All my last hopes are finally fading away
I have no real reason to stay
Piercing sadness stabs through my heart
Tearing my very existence apart
I can’t take this pain any more
This eternal headache, inside I’m so sore
It’s wearing me down, so hard to breathe
I hate everyone, everything, let me leave
Choking on every gulp of air
Each stumbling step is too much to bear
Kill my presence, kill my care
Take me away from this world of despair
No more will I pretend, no more can I hide
Just let me commit suicide
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No Reason To Stay

Contributed by afraid_of_fear on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

All my last hopes are finally fading away
I have no real reason to stay
Piercing sadness stabs through my heart
Tearing my very existence apart
I can’t take this pain any more
This eternal headache, inside I’m so sore
It’s wearing me down, so hard to breathe
I hate everyone, everything, let me leave
Choking on every gulp of air
Each stumbling step is too much to bear
Kill my presence, kill my care
Take me away from this world of despair
No more will I pretend, no more can I hide
Just let me commit suicide

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Re: No Reason To Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_star_angel on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:07:35 AM AEST
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Oh, Charlotte...I know how you're feeling. I've been there so much, but don't commit suicide..you're one of the major reasons why I haven't. Don't leave me, okay? If you do die, I won't know what to do...don't commit suicide...

Re: No Reason To Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 05:08:51 PM AEST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
No I won't let you commit suicide! Not that I can stop you,it is your decision,but please know that there are alot of people who will listen to your reasons for wanting to,including myself! Write me a poem on the pain you
are enduring right at this moment! I mean is it boys? Parents? Life in general? Please
stay alive...your poetry is beautiful! You have so much to say!And I want to hear it!
Angel always.....Godspeed my friend! joni

Re: No Reason To Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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What makes you think your pain will end if you do die? Could it be that then you have an eternity to feel the depair? Do you really want to take that chance? There is so much talent here please continue to write about your pain. We will be here to listen.

Shari

Re: No Reason To Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:59:38 PM AEST
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This was beautiful and summed up all of the emotions I have been experiencing. Your such a good poet

Re: No Reason To Stay (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 11:18:32 PM AEST
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Awww...charlotte....
Please don't leave....You are my dear friend.
Your poem is well written but I hope it remains a poem and not anything more.

Hanna

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