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[sid] => 19890
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Distant Voice
[time] => 2003-07-03 19:35:00
[hometext] => a person i share messages with, she is abused with harsh words, and callous acts.
[bodytext] => The voice I hear has touched my heart
with soft and hidden pleas.
She reaches out with worried hands
to who would hear and hold her trust.
The whispered words of failed dreams
and love that leaves her bruised.
And me the captured heart
never to break the trust she holds
from distant words we share... Crow
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[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
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Distant Voice
Contributed by
Crow
on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The voice I hear has touched my heart
with soft and hidden pleas.
She reaches out with worried hands
to who would hear and hold her trust.
The whispered words of failed dreams
and love that leaves her bruised.
And me the captured heart
never to break the trust she holds
from distant words we share... Crow
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 08:15:19 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...the best poetry site on he net!!!
This is such a beautiful poem...it says so much with so few words... Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Jenni |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:07:09 PM AEST
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| This is so beautifully written and your friend and yourself are lucky to have each other to talk to even if it is on the net. I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:14:51 PM AEST
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| thank you, i`ll visit your port. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:24:43 PM AEST
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thank you for the welcome, i`ve been looking for a home, a place to share thoughts, and read others. i`ve just started so if you see something horrid! don`t spare my feelings
nothing is sacred. Crow. |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 10:42:10 PM AEST
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thank you so much for the kind words.
a person so passive and afraid, i really feel for her. most of the pieces i do are small. i have more feelings than skill. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:43:08 AM AEST
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"She reaches out with worried hands
to who would hear and hold her trust.
"
So softly penned...very beautiful.Keep writing..I'll be reading ;) |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 03:50:02 AM AEST
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| thank you for the kind words. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by shelby on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:37:07 AM AEST
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lovely poem and very comforting words. Your a kind heart to care this deeply.Welcome to YPDC by the way, Ill be looking forward to reading more!
michelle |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:00:43 PM AEST
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| thank you so much for the welcome, and the kind thought. i`ll visit your port. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 03:12:47 PM AEST
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lovely poem. i feel for the girl ...and for you. i hope she gets the help she needs. welcome to ypdc. may you have bright and sunny days from now until forever ends.
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 11:09:27 PM AEST
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thank you for the welcome, there are those who are so passive they won`t stand. i get so angry sometimes. what the reason might be she won`t find help.
keep smiling, and writing, i like the piece you did. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:58:39 AM AEST
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I didn't get a chance to welcome you, but welcome to the best site for poetry on the net. This is another amzing write I only wish I could write like this, simple but beautiful.
The Phantom |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Crow on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 12:45:46 AM AEST
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| thank you for the welcome, this is the best comment yet, i would like to keep the work simple, and interesting. hopefully beautiful. Crow |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by ShadowsCloud on
Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 03:20:32 AM AEST
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This poem is beautifully written. I really enjoy reading it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Distant Voice
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:07:16 AM AEST
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| This is great. I can share your friends pain. Glad she's found a friend in you. Kimmie_mac |
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