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Array ( [sid] => 19904 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Remember [time] => 2003-07-04 02:05:00 [hometext] => For Zach, who I might finally be ready to forget [bodytext] => I remember when it first began
This like for you that I carried for so long
It was a year ago, it was summer
The night was warm and filled with fireworks
And your contagious laugh

I remember when it stopped
The like I had for you that I had carried around
It was a few months ago, it was winter
The night was cold and filled fireworks
And you with another as the new year began

I remember when it started again
The like I had for you that I almost forgot
It was a month ago, almost summer
The night was warm and I was lonely
And you were there ready and waiting

I remember when you finally kissed me
Finally recognizing the like you had for me
It was two weeks ago, it was summer
The day was hot and you wore a polo shirt
And I fell headfirst into your lips

I'll remember when it ends for good
When the like l have for you flickers out
It'll be a few weeks from now, it'll be summer
The night will be cool, and I won't be lonely
And I'll always love the friend you'll still be [comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 52 [informant] => savannah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

I Remember

Contributed by savannah on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I remember when it first began
This like for you that I carried for so long
It was a year ago, it was summer
The night was warm and filled with fireworks
And your contagious laugh

I remember when it stopped
The like I had for you that I had carried around
It was a few months ago, it was winter
The night was cold and filled fireworks
And you with another as the new year began

I remember when it started again
The like I had for you that I almost forgot
It was a month ago, almost summer
The night was warm and I was lonely
And you were there ready and waiting

I remember when you finally kissed me
Finally recognizing the like you had for me
It was two weeks ago, it was summer
The day was hot and you wore a polo shirt
And I fell headfirst into your lips

I'll remember when it ends for good
When the like l have for you flickers out
It'll be a few weeks from now, it'll be summer
The night will be cool, and I won't be lonely
And I'll always love the friend you'll still be

Copyright © savannah ... [ 2003-07-04 02:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 09:15:16 AM AEST
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Good write which I can relate to. Great work,
luvz stace

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 10:27:08 AM AEST
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good write
Shari

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by savannah on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 10:39:06 PM AEST
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good joma- FINALLY

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