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What is Left?
Contributed by
faffeee
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Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cold alone afraid unsaved
Inside here not living free
Headache consumes like a tidal wave
Life getting too much for me
Try to conceive
What pain has to leave
For me to feel like I have a means
A way to be and a purpose of breath
What more is there now
How much of mes left?
Dont want to stay
But dont want to give up
Cant I close this window
And make the jump?
Try as I might
Something doesnt want to fight
Finding no need to care
Misery not letting me dare
Open my bleary eyes
With my mask torn away
No chance for disguise
But no chance for my old self to stay
Watch as my smiling ghost floats
Haunts every second, it knows;
Sends a shiver trembling as it gloats
It knows what it stole
Copyright ©
faffeee
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2003-07-05 01:35:00]
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Re: What is Left?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:39:23 AM AEST
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Doesn't seem that jumbled to me... In fact, I enjoyed it.. you wrote about your feelings so well..
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Re: What is Left?
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 06:04:35 AM AEST
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you got your feelings across very clearly this is a good write
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Re: What is Left?
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:13:04 PM AEST
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very good write. i love it! you write your emotions out so well. may you have bright and sunny days from now until forever ends!
Always,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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