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Array ( [sid] => 20030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => God.. [time] => 2003-07-06 13:05:00 [hometext] => I wrote it when the words came from my head.. so be easy on me.. it might not be good. [bodytext] => I hate the way i am
I hate the pain i feel
everything is changing
it feels as if it's not real

I'm dying and you know it
even if they say i'm OK
they don't know the pain inside
and they can't make it go away

My life is great,
well someparts it is
was i really that much of a mistake?

I believe that god hates me
and he wishes i was never made
he just wanted the people around me to suffer
and feel all of my pain

god should die..
i don't think many will care
but if i die
damn.. there's a bunch of despair [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 6 [informant] => xraz0rx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
God..

Contributed by xraz0rx on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I hate the way i am
I hate the pain i feel
everything is changing
it feels as if it's not real

I'm dying and you know it
even if they say i'm OK
they don't know the pain inside
and they can't make it go away

My life is great,
well someparts it is
was i really that much of a mistake?

I believe that god hates me
and he wishes i was never made
he just wanted the people around me to suffer
and feel all of my pain

god should die..
i don't think many will care
but if i die
damn.. there's a bunch of despair




Copyright © xraz0rx ... [ 2003-07-06 13:05:00]
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Re: God.. (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 03:08:05 PM AEST
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Your poem is fair..however, it lacks a certain
maturity
----------------------------------
Here's how you gain maturity
live every day as if you knew
by the time the sun has set
your life and you'll be thru...



Re: God.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Xx31187xX on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 05:44:30 AM AEST
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i think its really good i really like the 1st part




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