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Array ( [sid] => 20103 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2003-07-08 00:35:00 [hometext] => *sigh* ...maybe...maybe sometimes i am better off dead.... [bodytext] => Instigated memories
Flowing through my head
They sing their painful melody
As I lay here in my bed

Staring at the ceiling
Wondering if this is insanity
The clock ticks my life away
As I breathe, mechanically

The emptiness fills my heart
As I think about days past
The bruises still fresh on my body will fade
But the pain will always last

Maybe I should end it all now
So he can’t hurt me anymore
Maybe I should just walk out the door
And try to make it out on the streets somehow

All these thoughts goin through my head
And all I can think about
Is being better off dead
Maybe by mornings light

I will no longer have to fight

I will no longer be anyone’s problem

Instigated memories
are flowing through my head
I hum their painful melody
As I cry here in my bed

Alone. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wild_heart_of_fire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Alone

Contributed by wild_heart_of_fire on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Instigated memories
Flowing through my head
They sing their painful melody
As I lay here in my bed

Staring at the ceiling
Wondering if this is insanity
The clock ticks my life away
As I breathe, mechanically

The emptiness fills my heart
As I think about days past
The bruises still fresh on my body will fade
But the pain will always last

Maybe I should end it all now
So he can’t hurt me anymore
Maybe I should just walk out the door
And try to make it out on the streets somehow

All these thoughts goin through my head
And all I can think about
Is being better off dead
Maybe by mornings light

I will no longer have to fight

I will no longer be anyone’s problem

Instigated memories
are flowing through my head
I hum their painful melody
As I cry here in my bed

Alone.

Copyright Â© wild_heart_of_fire ... [ 2003-07-08 00:35:00]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 01:28:10 AM AEST
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dont let any man hurt you or bring you to this point. Your feelings are so well expressed in this poem.
michelle

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:30:34 AM AEST
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the feelings you share in this poem just tear at me. you showed great courage and spirit in "you can not destroy me" don`t let anyone take that from you. excellent work here. Crow.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinlimbo on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:51:51 AM AEST
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Wow. Wonderul, you reach out and squeezed my heart. I trull felt your pain, thank you for the outstanding poem.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:58:12 AM AEST
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your talent is unmistakable do not let anyone tear you down. get out, get help. believe in yourself. you are worth the effort. your pain is real but you can overcome it. if you need to talk pm me

Shari

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:40:15 AM AEST
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Very heart touching and well expressed poem.
Saira

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 02:12:28 AM AEST
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This is so very sad...so touching.. but don't ever think that you'll be better off dead. Let me tell you how I felt today...last year about this same time..I thought of ending my life.. Today..I cried like a baby when my brother and his family left from their vacation after spending the last 3 weeks with me...and only because I thought of what I would have missed out on if I had done it last year.....I'm so glad I didn't give up..You shouldn't either...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th July 2003 @ 03:05:51 PM AEST
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Great write, just remember not to let anyone bring you down, least of all a man :|

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:31:02 PM AEST
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oh this is such an incredible poem...i really love it...the best of yours i have read (and i am in the process of reading them all) very good, but so sad...if you ever need to talk, please pm me...beautiful...

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:55:36 PM AEST
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awww such a sad write twin, but beautiful, as usual. *sniff why are we so screwed up? lol, j/p, i luv ya bunches twin, almost as much as i luv ur poetry (j/k) ;)
Lisa

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