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Darkness of a Broken Mind
Contributed by
blackfire9786
on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Fear lifts inside me
My heart pounding in my chest
I think Im going crazy
Cant go on living like this.
Retreating faces, in the dark
Moving shadows through my head
Hearing voices echo through the night
As I lay here in my bed
Rattling doors, banging on the wall
These sounds penetrating into my soul
My mind is breaking, Im starting to fall
My carefully guarded life is spinning out of control.
Losing myself in empty thoughts
Trying to fill an empty heart
Hiding alone, my breath short and fast
Hiding from the enemies that haunt me from my past
I fear Im really losing my mind
What would my family do?
If anyone could see in, what would they find?
Would my insanity prove true?
Lifes an endless cycle
The sun sets and rises
At night Im faced with my true self
At day hidden with many disguises
So welcome to my life
Where demons lurk and voices sound
Where pain can drive the mind to break
And light is never found.
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2003-07-08 02:05:00]
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:13:14 AM AEST
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another great poem..suprise suprise! lol. i could read this one a thousand times over...great job lis.
Your Twin,
~*riki lynn*~ |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by lostinlimbo on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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| Very good writing. Intense and dark, I really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:48:19 AM AEST
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good write, you express yourself very well
Shari |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 04:12:52 AM AEST
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| i really like this, everything flows so well it was over to soon. you and your twin do so well. take care of each other. you both have a fan! good job, Crow |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 09:34:16 AM AEST
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Wow... what a dark write. I really loved it! The title is simply amazing and fits to a T.
Saira |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 8th July 2003 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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this is beautiful lisa...
x_x_x |
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Re: Darkness of a Broken Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th July 2003 @ 11:51:49 PM AEST
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| well done, great images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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