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Array ( [sid] => 20182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Forevermore [time] => 2003-07-09 14:35:00 [hometext] => This is about a young man who feels suicide is the only way to prove his love to a woman who has found love in another. This is his final moments. [bodytext] => I feel it rip me apart from inside
My pain and agony, the tears I can't hide
I shiver and shake without control
To think this thought that I know
How could she? What did I do wrong?
Stomped on my heart and said so long
What does he have that I don't?
What will he do that I won't?
I bet I can think of one thing for sure
With this blade and an irreversable cure
To give my life to prove my love
To bleed for her has to be enough
I'm so numb I can't feel the cut
But I feel the warmth force my eyes shut
Lying back and giving in
I hope she finds me soon, this I'll win
Goodbye, so long it's time to soar
Goodbye my love, I'll love you.. forevermore [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lostinlimbo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forevermore

Contributed by lostinlimbo on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I feel it rip me apart from inside
My pain and agony, the tears I can't hide
I shiver and shake without control
To think this thought that I know
How could she? What did I do wrong?
Stomped on my heart and said so long
What does he have that I don't?
What will he do that I won't?
I bet I can think of one thing for sure
With this blade and an irreversable cure
To give my life to prove my love
To bleed for her has to be enough
I'm so numb I can't feel the cut
But I feel the warmth force my eyes shut
Lying back and giving in
I hope she finds me soon, this I'll win
Goodbye, so long it's time to soar
Goodbye my love, I'll love you.. forevermore

Copyright © lostinlimbo ... [ 2003-07-09 14:35:00]
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Re: Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 03:58:28 PM AEST
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This is so sad, and yet it's the most beautiful moment. Well done.

*J*

Re: Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 04:24:36 PM AEST
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very very beautiful...so sad...

Re: Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 06:56:53 PM AEST
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very well written,, but disturbing to think that taking ones life will prove love..to me that is not romantic at all

Shari

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