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and no one answers me.

I ask someone a question
and they don`t here my plea.

So then I yell and scream
But no one hears my cry.

No one sees me standing here
and i wonder why.

I ask my a question
"What has happened to me."

I can not find the answer
until i look and see.

I see that i am fake
my heart,my mind and my soul.

Then i ask myself
is anything actually real??? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => evil_demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fake

Contributed by evil_demon on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am sitting here talking
and no one answers me.

I ask someone a question
and they don`t here my plea.

So then I yell and scream
But no one hears my cry.

No one sees me standing here
and i wonder why.

I ask my a question
"What has happened to me."

I can not find the answer
until i look and see.

I see that i am fake
my heart,my mind and my soul.

Then i ask myself
is anything actually real???

Copyright © evil_demon ... [ 2003-07-12 01:35:00]
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Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 11:37:12 AM AEST
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No your not the only one, i can relate to this, but i am here for you if you want me to be, just PM me whenever you like.

Great Write!

- Becca

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 12:53:24 PM AEST
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Like this one alot, you got talent.
Jeff

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:48:10 PM AEST
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i can easily relat to this, a great poem i hope to read more of ur work ~Apryl

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 04:52:03 PM AEST
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One of the penalties of evolution is that in certain species (like ours) it is intelligence that evolves. The biggest factor in this development is aquiring the imagination to conceive solutions.
The first thing we have to learn is how to control this power.. If we don't learn this it "runs away with us"
This is what is happening to you. You have lost control of your mind.

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 05:36:41 PM AEST
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One of the penalties of evolution is that in certain species (like ours) it is intelligence that evolves. The biggest factor in this development is aquiring the imagination to conceive solutions.
The first thing we have to learn is how to control this power.. If we don't learn this it "runs away with us"
This is what is happening to you. You have lost control of your mind.

Re: Fake (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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i relate to this very well its sad that soe people can tret others this way. good write

Brandy

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