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Array ( [sid] => 20280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Winter's Suicide [time] => 2003-07-12 05:35:00 [hometext] => nothing really to say, just read and comment [bodytext] => Her body is consumed by the cold
Stumbling a few last steps into the snow
She wondered why she wandered so far off
When she had no place to go
She always knew she'd die alone
But she could never predict it would be like this
She knows deaths waiting for her around the corner
So she begins to reminisce
Shuts her eyes black and blue
And covers the cuts from her wrists running up
Holds the last ounce of warmth close to her heart
Feels dawn's awakening dew
On her lips and fingertips
And lets the past rip her right apart
She can remember the day when she ran away
To a new life to start
She figured she had no reasons to stay
So left with nothing but a bag and some dreams in her heart
Took a train downtown
For herself to try to find
But when the train reached its last stop
She knew she had left something behind
She left her heart in her hometown
And now she can't sleep
She would kill to take back those words
"My heart is yours to keep"
And she knows he never cared
And that love is nothing but a sin
She regrets her whole pathetic life
As she chokes on a handful of Vicadin
Which leads her back into the winter's snow
Just seconds away from her demise
The pain begins to slowly numb
As for one last time she cries
She forgives everyone for the pain
For all the tears from when she cried
And ends herself with an apology
That she was weak enough for suicide [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TeenageEmoGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
A Winter's Suicide

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Her body is consumed by the cold
Stumbling a few last steps into the snow
She wondered why she wandered so far off
When she had no place to go
She always knew she'd die alone
But she could never predict it would be like this
She knows deaths waiting for her around the corner
So she begins to reminisce
Shuts her eyes black and blue
And covers the cuts from her wrists running up
Holds the last ounce of warmth close to her heart
Feels dawn's awakening dew
On her lips and fingertips
And lets the past rip her right apart
She can remember the day when she ran away
To a new life to start
She figured she had no reasons to stay
So left with nothing but a bag and some dreams in her heart
Took a train downtown
For herself to try to find
But when the train reached its last stop
She knew she had left something behind
She left her heart in her hometown
And now she can't sleep
She would kill to take back those words
"My heart is yours to keep"
And she knows he never cared
And that love is nothing but a sin
She regrets her whole pathetic life
As she chokes on a handful of Vicadin
Which leads her back into the winter's snow
Just seconds away from her demise
The pain begins to slowly numb
As for one last time she cries
She forgives everyone for the pain
For all the tears from when she cried
And ends herself with an apology
That she was weak enough for suicide




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-07-12 05:35:00]
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Re: A Winter's Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:37:35 AM AEST
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although i do not normally care for suicide poems, i really think this was well written
Shari


Re: A Winter's Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by tinka_belle on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:45:56 AM AEST
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this poem is so well written
you can really picture yourself as this girl
out in the snow
crying
dying




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