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Array ( [sid] => 20398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No More [time] => 2003-07-14 09:35:00 [hometext] => Once in your lifetime you feel like this but most of us just can't put it into words. I had inspiration last night. It just came out of nowhere and I knew I had to write it down. [bodytext] => No more hopes and no more crying,
Just the empty pain of trying.

You live, you love, your heart gets broken.
You learn to take it as Life's twisted token.

A tortured love, A twisted fate,
You live to learn, You learn to hate.

No more tears on Life's endless stream,
No more love in Life's endless dream.

No more dreams of joy and happiness,
All that's left is deceit and worthlessness.

The world is dark and cold and gray,
Nothing to do but kneel and pray.

Pray when it's over you'll come out on top,
And all the bottled up pain will leave or stop.

Love has left as chances are taken,
And Love's good intentions are always mistaken. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 32 [informant] => krazed_AnGeL101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

No More

Contributed by krazed_AnGeL101 on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No more hopes and no more crying,
Just the empty pain of trying.

You live, you love, your heart gets broken.
You learn to take it as Life's twisted token.

A tortured love, A twisted fate,
You live to learn, You learn to hate.

No more tears on Life's endless stream,
No more love in Life's endless dream.

No more dreams of joy and happiness,
All that's left is deceit and worthlessness.

The world is dark and cold and gray,
Nothing to do but kneel and pray.

Pray when it's over you'll come out on top,
And all the bottled up pain will leave or stop.

Love has left as chances are taken,
And Love's good intentions are always mistaken.

Copyright © krazed_AnGeL101 ... [ 2003-07-14 09:35:00]
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Re: No More (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 10:40:44 AM AEST
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I like the way this was written, like a drummer on a norse ship banin away it gets accross the inevitability of it well

Re: No More (User Rating: 1 )
by evil_demon on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 02:28:33 PM AEST
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This is so true nice job

Re: No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 02:29:12 AM AEST
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You have red mine I have red yours........Yet I find you have beautiful way with words, where as sadness is only in mine.
Keep up the execellent poetry, so that I may stop by and read from time to time.

Re: No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 11:16:50 AM AEST
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it does seem to be that way, good write Crow

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