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Array ( [sid] => 20411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => beauty is blinding [time] => 2003-07-14 16:05:00 [hometext] => This is about the most beautiful person I have ever met. Right now, he is in Africa and I am in Korea...he has no idea I feel this way. [bodytext] => I saw immortality secrete from a star when I looked into your eyes
split like diamonds showering the water
I gaze into your universe maybe just for one grasp of breathe and life to show me that I am not blind.
You are the forbidden fruit of the tree of life that breathes lifes blood into me.
Can I speak all of these words, my twisted tongue and dillusional dreams?
You are a beautiful painting my dear, a flourished beauty blinding the eyes of the one who was sought to see.
I can't bear to be given the ability to see you and not speak of the things you posses,
This is my sanctaty and this is my insanity,
Just You;
The artist,The florist, and The melody maker,
strumming the songs of a new day and dawn.
We've seen throught it all, just to be it all...
I can not see you and not tell you all of the things you are. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 30 [informant] => JadedSunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => PoemsonBeauty )
beauty is blinding

Contributed by JadedSunshine on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty



I saw immortality secrete from a star when I looked into your eyes
split like diamonds showering the water
I gaze into your universe maybe just for one grasp of breathe and life to show me that I am not blind.
You are the forbidden fruit of the tree of life that breathes lifes blood into me.
Can I speak all of these words, my twisted tongue and dillusional dreams?
You are a beautiful painting my dear, a flourished beauty blinding the eyes of the one who was sought to see.
I can't bear to be given the ability to see you and not speak of the things you posses,
This is my sanctaty and this is my insanity,
Just You;
The artist,The florist, and The melody maker,
strumming the songs of a new day and dawn.
We've seen throught it all, just to be it all...
I can not see you and not tell you all of the things you are.




Copyright © JadedSunshine ... [ 2003-07-14 16:05:00]
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Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 05:02:18 PM AEST
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Dear JadedSunshine,
Eloquently beautiful, JS, but please don't waste all that love on us. Let him know how you feel....with all those miles between you would be safe, I'd say.
I'm 66 JS and you certainly strumped my heart strings, over and over again!
You must be a very beautiful, eloquent person yourself....as what we see in others, we are ourselves.
Oh, how I enjoyed your loving poem! I'll be looking forward to many more!
Lovingcritters
csz191@msn.com


Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 06:31:41 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful write. Well done!
Saira


Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 07:29:20 PM AEST
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nice job, you better tell your secret to him. Crow


Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 11:46:14 PM AEST
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Wow... you need to let him know how you feel... this is absolutely stunning...
Jenni


Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:54:05 AM AEST
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wonderfully written, I agree let him know
Shari


Re: beauty is blinding (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 04:30:45 AM AEST
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this is an amazingly beautiful poem of love, hugs n' love nessa




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