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daddy i love so dear
please dont hit mommy
it drags upon a tear

matt, you shouldnt have died so soon
now were at ur funeral playin you favorite tune
but now that you took your life
all of ur friends live in strife

auntie you took away your life
with a gun and a knife
you didnt have to go
but i love you even so

scars upon my arms
make me feel so warm
keep me sane inside
but still i have to hide

i hide from the pain
of every single day
when momma was hit
my room is where i sit

when matt took his life
because of his wife

my family doesnt see
the torment inside me
its hiden behind a wall
that i built to stand so tall

auntie killed some one
and now her life is done

and im losing people left and right
i wish i could just say goodnight [comments] => 4 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 13 [informant] => dreadfulsuicide1570 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

DreadfulSuicide

Contributed by dreadfulsuicide1570 on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

remove your hands from me
daddy i love so dear
please dont hit mommy
it drags upon a tear

matt, you shouldnt have died so soon
now were at ur funeral playin you favorite tune
but now that you took your life
all of ur friends live in strife

auntie you took away your life
with a gun and a knife
you didnt have to go
but i love you even so

scars upon my arms
make me feel so warm
keep me sane inside
but still i have to hide

i hide from the pain
of every single day
when momma was hit
my room is where i sit

when matt took his life
because of his wife

my family doesnt see
the torment inside me
its hiden behind a wall
that i built to stand so tall

auntie killed some one
and now her life is done

and im losing people left and right
i wish i could just say goodnight

Copyright © dreadfulsuicide1570 ... [ 2003-07-16 19:45:00]
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Re: DreadfulSuicide (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 08:17:54 PM AEST
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This such a sad but very well done write. I am sorry for your loss.

Re: DreadfulSuicide (User Rating: 1 )
by dreadfulsuicide1570 on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 07:12:28 PM AEST
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dont be sorry, everything happens for a reason.....im not saying i wasnt sad but if it wasnt for those peepol i would have nothing to write about.....

Re: DreadfulSuicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 11:19:20 PM AEST
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keep writing it does help, my best wishes for you. good write. Crow

Re: DreadfulSuicide (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:41:51 PM AEST
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possibly my favorite poem of yours i have read... so much feeling contained in one poem. my favorite line was:

"scars upon my arms
make me feel so warm
keep me sane inside
but still i have to hide"

i think that is true for a lot of people, remember every scar is special and tells a story, we all have our scars whether they are visable or not... dont be ashamed of them ~Apryl

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