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Array ( [sid] => 20540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => All In My Head [time] => 2003-07-16 21:25:00 [hometext] => Here is poem I wrote a couple days ago. It takes about an emotional struggle that goes on with past memories in my head. Please be honest and tell me what you think. [bodytext] =>
Just when i thought i was up
you picked me up and throw me back down again
its a constant struggle
a never ending battle
between me and my head
my mind swims in a pool of vacant feelings of abandonment, betrayal, and despair
while i struggle to make it through the day
the maddening thoughts bring me to a breakdown
where i lose myself in the depression
craving nothing more than the sweet release of self-injury
these feelings hold me captive, a slave to my past
that no matter how hard i try not to look back
the memories are always there
its gotten ahold of me, choking what is left
as i gasp for breath i surrender myself
and i realize that i am nothing more than broken
that nothing and no one can ever fix [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Jenefur [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

All In My Head

Contributed by Jenefur on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Just when i thought i was up
you picked me up and throw me back down again
its a constant struggle
a never ending battle
between me and my head
my mind swims in a pool of vacant feelings of abandonment, betrayal, and despair
while i struggle to make it through the day
the maddening thoughts bring me to a breakdown
where i lose myself in the depression
craving nothing more than the sweet release of self-injury
these feelings hold me captive, a slave to my past
that no matter how hard i try not to look back
the memories are always there
its gotten ahold of me, choking what is left
as i gasp for breath i surrender myself
and i realize that i am nothing more than broken
that nothing and no one can ever fix

Copyright © Jenefur ... [ 2003-07-16 21:25:00]
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Re: All In My Head (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:25:46 AM AEST
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WOW!! Great write...lovely imagery...but oh..so sad...
Don't ever give up hope...anything that's broken can be fixed....
Hugs
Jenni

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