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without betraying my feelings of loving you?
I avoid your glance in my attempt
to paint your name in a longing whisper,
savor the sound of your laugh,
and hold your gait in an embrace of song and rhyme.

If I was to fall to your seduction,
the passion wouldn’t last
in a cold walk from an empty bed,
exposing me to the morning’s glare,
spoiled on the drawn linens,
spilling the seed of poetry
onto the deaf ear of debauchery.

The night hides the fantasy,
shadowed in my yearning never told
ever to hold in my vault of affection.
And in my walk with you,
I adore the conversation in my head,
seeding another poem that springs
from my reason to love you.

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How do I think of you in the long day...

Contributed by chuckx on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



How do I think of you in the long day
without betraying my feelings of loving you?
I avoid your glance in my attempt
to paint your name in a longing whisper,
savor the sound of your laugh,
and hold your gait in an embrace of song and rhyme.

If I was to fall to your seduction,
the passion wouldn’t last
in a cold walk from an empty bed,
exposing me to the morning’s glare,
spoiled on the drawn linens,
spilling the seed of poetry
onto the deaf ear of debauchery.

The night hides the fantasy,
shadowed in my yearning never told
ever to hold in my vault of affection.
And in my walk with you,
I adore the conversation in my head,
seeding another poem that springs
from my reason to love you.





Copyright © chuckx ... [ 2003-07-23 10:35:00]
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Re: How do I think of you in the long day... (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 11:19:17 AM AEST
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You my friend..are incredible..I am just so taken with the tenderness and longing in this poem.You are definately a heart with a pen attached.


Re: How do I think of you in the long day... (User Rating: 1 )
by Chuckx on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:07:35 PM AEST
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a heart with a pen attached...I cracked up laughing. what a compliment. thank you. well, I do wear my heart on my sleeve so sometimes it drips on the empty page and I try like an ink-blot test to make something out of my ache.


Re: How do I think of you in the long day... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:26:28 PM AEST
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very well spoken, a feeling I know all too well
Shari


Re: How do I think of you in the long day... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:29:35 AM AEST
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Well written.. it is beautiful. venkat


Re: How do I think of you in the long day... (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 07:59:38 AM AEST
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Oh, this is sublime poetry ... words that reached deep into my heart, for I have felt exactly this way as well ... the yearning ... so well written ... Jan




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