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Array ( [sid] => 21002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Return To Me [time] => 2003-07-26 03:35:00 [hometext] => first off, sorry it's kinda long. second the topic, ohh hard to pick, it is a song I wrote however it goes under "song lyrics" "lost love", and "love remembered". so what to do?
It's about, missing the one you love after they decided to call it quit's, and you want them back, or need them back in your life. this happened to me with my ex, however we are still friends.
The song has an upbeat yet it's slow and mellow at the same time. if only you could hear it.
pLeAsE comment I'd like to know what you think. [bodytext] => Yesterday was the last day I shed my tears.
And there ain’t no way to go back.
I cried to long waiting for you to return to me.
Seems I waited far too long.

You are so curious in so many ways
And I can’t tell your rights and wrongs
An endless page of mysteries
That I’ve been reading too damn long.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

I’ve waited to long for you to return to me
that my eyes have blinded shut.
Just like the sun that goes down at night
repeatedly, I miss you just as much.

And even though you may never return.
There’s a place that belongs to you.
That place is in my heart
My heart for no one else but you.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

Well after you left I was scarred
On the inside you cut me deep.
But I will still feel the same about you.
No matter where you are.

Even though you crushed my heart
there’s a place that wasn’t destroyed
That place is the spot I built for you.
That place where my dream is me next to you

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
If you came back I would be happy.
But when you left this life I could not face.

But who cares you will never return to me
You think that I can just move on?
This is the last night I cry my tears
for tomorrow I may just be gone.

The wind will carry me far away.
To a place where I’ll be happy again
Someday we will all fall in love.
Someday we will all fall and die. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 43 [informant] => metalmouth666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Return To Me

Contributed by metalmouth666 on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Yesterday was the last day I shed my tears.
And there ain’t no way to go back.
I cried to long waiting for you to return to me.
Seems I waited far too long.

You are so curious in so many ways
And I can’t tell your rights and wrongs
An endless page of mysteries
That I’ve been reading too damn long.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

I’ve waited to long for you to return to me
that my eyes have blinded shut.
Just like the sun that goes down at night
repeatedly, I miss you just as much.

And even though you may never return.
There’s a place that belongs to you.
That place is in my heart
My heart for no one else but you.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

Well after you left I was scarred
On the inside you cut me deep.
But I will still feel the same about you.
No matter where you are.

Even though you crushed my heart
there’s a place that wasn’t destroyed
That place is the spot I built for you.
That place where my dream is me next to you

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
It was a choice you had to make.
But it’s one I just can’t face.

And you may call me obsessed but I’m just in love
If there’s a thing as “love at first sight”
I fell in love the day I first saw you.
I believed I was in heavens light.
And who knew we both would fall in love.
But later you would decide to leave.
If you came back I would be happy.
But when you left this life I could not face.

But who cares you will never return to me
You think that I can just move on?
This is the last night I cry my tears
for tomorrow I may just be gone.

The wind will carry me far away.
To a place where I’ll be happy again
Someday we will all fall in love.
Someday we will all fall and die.

Copyright Â© metalmouth666 ... [ 2003-07-26 03:35:00]
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Re: Return To Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:58:14 AM AEST
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I really like this song, songs like this need to be heard like the poems need to be read, you should record this if you can afford it, small places are cheap enough where I am. send it out on mp3 I would love to hear it.

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