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Array ( [sid] => 21296 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My first time [time] => 2003-07-31 12:05:00 [hometext] => yeah it kinda explains itself [bodytext] => You knew my feelings
My thoughts and my dreams
I loved your free spirit
And wanted to know you better
I guess the feeling was mutual
As i felt your warm body press against mine
The pain and pleasure
Was enough to make me head over heals
I remember the details
As if it was yesterday
It wasn't romantic
It wasn't a fairy tail
I don't regreat a thing
I still love you
Even though you're only a friend
I care about you as a brother
You're always there for me
You're always there to talk to
And you mean the world to me
You always have
And always will [comments] => 1 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => squeesh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

My first time

Contributed by squeesh on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You knew my feelings
My thoughts and my dreams
I loved your free spirit
And wanted to know you better
I guess the feeling was mutual
As i felt your warm body press against mine
The pain and pleasure
Was enough to make me head over heals
I remember the details
As if it was yesterday
It wasn't romantic
It wasn't a fairy tail
I don't regreat a thing
I still love you
Even though you're only a friend
I care about you as a brother
You're always there for me
You're always there to talk to
And you mean the world to me
You always have
And always will

Copyright © squeesh ... [ 2003-07-31 12:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My first time (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:15:27 AM AEST
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This was really sweet, what a good topic to write about. Ah innocence, I still remember my first time... I'll always love him too, even tho i havent seen him in 10 years. I think we always will love those we love, even when we grow apart. Bless you.

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