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Array ( [sid] => 21451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fade to Blue [time] => 2003-08-04 09:45:00 [hometext] => I had been talking with a friend who seemed a little down. A little later that night she was standing outside my sliding windows with a tear in her eyes. She said, I fade to blue. [bodytext] => As hard as she tried,
and with all her heart

A crystal tear fell,
for a love to be hers

A love she so desired
would not come on the wind
or the stars she stands beneath.

Where was that knight,
the guardian of her heart,
a gentle voice that held the key.

Silence was all that echoed,
her heart now painted with tears.

Reflections of one more night
her world would fade to blue. Crow
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Fade to Blue

Contributed by crow on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

As hard as she tried,
and with all her heart

A crystal tear fell,
for a love to be hers

A love she so desired
would not come on the wind
or the stars she stands beneath.

Where was that knight,
the guardian of her heart,
a gentle voice that held the key.

Silence was all that echoed,
her heart now painted with tears.

Reflections of one more night
her world would fade to blue. Crow

Copyright © crow ... [ 2003-08-04 09:45:00]
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Re: Fade to Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 09:57:51 AM AEST
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Beautiful I could feel these emotions coming throughin the words of this poem. Your such a caring person.
Michelle

Re: Fade to Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 10:25:57 AM AEST
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You painted her loneliness and pain well..you have a good heart my friend

Shari

Re: Fade to Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 12:55:13 PM AEST
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I could say the usual..beautiful write,great depth,so emotional..But Im afraid I am a lil lost for words on this one :)..I didnt even get to start the poem,before I was moved..just with the intro alone,I had a tear.Wish I could reach out and hold her hand.I know this feeling sooo well and I all I can say is you are a pen with a heart attached.(((huggers))) to you my friend :)

Re: Fade to Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 01:13:04 PM AEST
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i love this poem, and also your sharing the meaning behind it, beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Fade to Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 04:24:40 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. I hope she gets what she wants and may her heart be painted with, not tears but, vivacious colours real soon! Such a caring friend she has in you. Good write!
Saira

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