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[aid] => Mick
[title] => For Kane
[time] => 2003-08-04 18:25:00
[hometext] => Well Kane those were pretty rough comments about me, but that's ok, here's my ansewer.
The Phantom
[bodytext] => Kane what a shame,
A man of poetic talent as yourself,
Should never pick on someone that's not there to defend themself,
That's like stabbing a friend in the back, did you think I would snap,
Maybe you thought I'd give in to the dark and ignor my heart,
What did you hope to gain, all you did was help me to write again,
I'm not gonna belittle you, I have nothing to prove,
I amit, I'm not a fan of the dark, but that doesn't mean I don't write from my heart,
I do hope you shine, you poetry keeps getting better with time,
Nightlife, that was quite a write, I had to read it twice,
You write with such pain, our writing is like one in the same,
I write about heartbreak, you write about pain, I write about love, you write about going insane,
You find freedom in the dark, I find freedom in my heart,
You dream of death, I dream of a warm caress,
We each have our own way of dealing with life,
You picked the dark, I picked the light,
Now fantasies can be real, it all depends on how you feel,
I may be forgotten, but my poetry is not in a coffen,
Your poetry is great, I myself is not one to partake,
I hope your anger has come to an end, come on Kane let's be friends.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
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For Kane
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Kane what a shame,
A man of poetic talent as yourself,
Should never pick on someone that's not there to defend themself,
That's like stabbing a friend in the back, did you think I would snap,
Maybe you thought I'd give in to the dark and ignor my heart,
What did you hope to gain, all you did was help me to write again,
I'm not gonna belittle you, I have nothing to prove,
I amit, I'm not a fan of the dark, but that doesn't mean I don't write from my heart,
I do hope you shine, you poetry keeps getting better with time,
Nightlife, that was quite a write, I had to read it twice,
You write with such pain, our writing is like one in the same,
I write about heartbreak, you write about pain, I write about love, you write about going insane,
You find freedom in the dark, I find freedom in my heart,
You dream of death, I dream of a warm caress,
We each have our own way of dealing with life,
You picked the dark, I picked the light,
Now fantasies can be real, it all depends on how you feel,
I may be forgotten, but my poetry is not in a coffen,
Your poetry is great, I myself is not one to partake,
I hope your anger has come to an end, come on Kane let's be friends.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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Re: For Kane
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by jaeann on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 06:42:50 PM AEST
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| cool poem...... |
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Re: For Kane
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:50:34 PM AEST
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| very good write, don`t let a thing stop you from writing. very poignant words. Crow |
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Re: For Kane
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by PoloRM on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 01:11:28 AM AEST
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| Great reply to Kane's poem! |
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Re: For Kane
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 02:54:37 AM AEST
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| Excellent ..I didn't read Kane's..yea two or three poems of Kane I read..he is a king of dark poetry..you both are good friends..forget these these things..keep your friendship alive.. best wishes to you both. venkat |
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Re: For Kane
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:34:38 AM AEST
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| ~write on my friend! this poem is a great response:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: For Kane
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 12:39:18 PM AEST
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| a great response... you took the hugh road and didn't resort to the hate he showed too... you definutly showed your mature side in this. i'm a little confused at how this all started... i thought he liked some of your poems... (like the soldier one) anyways im glad your writting again keep it up ~Apryl |
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Re: For Kane
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 06:46:07 PM AEST
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Phantom, I'm glad you were able to deal with this in the manner with which you did.. *wink*
Hope to see many more writes from you... and even looking forward to reading the works of your adversary, Kane also...
Luv and hugs from your island friend...
Jenni |
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Re: For Kane
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 12:44:34 AM AEST
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Being tasteful yet to the point!
Great to speak your mind,you both are great poets in my book! Christina |
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Re: For Kane
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by Kane on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST
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Well the masked one speaks, very cute, always the nice guy. that's fine you know as well as I do, your scared of the dark, that's why you write about love, heartbreak, and loneliness. Don't think this over, anyway it twas a nice write.
Kane |
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Re: For Kane
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:07:25 AM AEST
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We all come from the dirt... does it matter how we chose to return???
Great write! |
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Re: For Kane
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by abushey on
Sunday, 5th October 2003 @ 08:37:57 AM AEST
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awesome!
love your perspective
the feelings you write about will serve you well
throughout your life.
very smart to hold on to the love in your heart and not try to tear down the failings in someone elses. |
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