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Array ( [sid] => 21499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wretched Fall [time] => 2003-08-05 13:25:00 [hometext] => One of the first things I ever wrote. My bestfriend and I wrote it one boring night. Lyrics. [bodytext] => Where were you when I was falling through the never? Take my pain and hold it close forever - Temporal vortex distorting time, so I lie down and take reality - you base my fate on your technicality - Was it my fault you died so young? Shards of nothing to pierce your tongue - You cannot breathe for fear of your demise, and with death there is nothing to compromise

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all

What about the times when you lied? - So what about me and my crimes - It never amounted to anything more - Nothing more then you could abhore - I don't care that you died, I don't care if you find - The answers to the questions that don't exist - Reach for my soul - MEET MY FIST

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all
BURN IN THE BLAZE - CRINGE FROM THE EYELESS GAZE

Well you're dead now, soul has wondered to eternity - So just tell me are you satisfied? The gluttony filled your pride - Slit your back, be exposed - Once again, give me ammo - To cut you up, shut you down - Raze everything that's around - That you ever cared about, ***** cared about - Give your life to be with me - Join me in my wretch...
WRETCH (x7)

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all
BURN IN THE BLAZE - CRINGE FROM THE EYELESS GAZE
GIVE YOUR LIFE TO BE WITH ME
WITH DEATH THERE IS NO COMPROMISE
JOIN ME IN MY WRETCH [comments] => 2 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 46 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )
Wretched Fall

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 01:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic



Where were you when I was falling through the never? Take my pain and hold it close forever - Temporal vortex distorting time, so I lie down and take reality - you base my fate on your technicality - Was it my fault you died so young? Shards of nothing to pierce your tongue - You cannot breathe for fear of your demise, and with death there is nothing to compromise

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all

What about the times when you lied? - So what about me and my crimes - It never amounted to anything more - Nothing more then you could abhore - I don't care that you died, I don't care if you find - The answers to the questions that don't exist - Reach for my soul - MEET MY FIST

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all
BURN IN THE BLAZE - CRINGE FROM THE EYELESS GAZE

Well you're dead now, soul has wondered to eternity - So just tell me are you satisfied? The gluttony filled your pride - Slit your back, be exposed - Once again, give me ammo - To cut you up, shut you down - Raze everything that's around - That you ever cared about, ***** cared about - Give your life to be with me - Join me in my wretch...
WRETCH (x7)

Fall [FALL] (x3)
Fall in nothing, feed your soul to all
BURN IN THE BLAZE - CRINGE FROM THE EYELESS GAZE
GIVE YOUR LIFE TO BE WITH ME
WITH DEATH THERE IS NO COMPROMISE
JOIN ME IN MY WRETCH




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Re: Wretched Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 08:59:54 PM AEST
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your lyrics are amazing...........tha first line....WOW.........


Re: Wretched Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:19:06 PM AEST
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let me guess, Stefon helped you write these? They are good.




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