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Array ( [sid] => 21502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Shattered and Repulsive [time] => 2003-08-05 15:05:00 [hometext] => well Wow is all I have to say when reading this again (that I wrote just not to shy of a year ago).
hopefully it's not that too..."raw" or...I don't know lol :) just um enjoy? if there is a possibility [bodytext] => As I look through this mirror,
I can't help but to have more fear.
This fear has no mercy just one destination,
To destroy what's left in the rest of the nation.
It has come to finish off from where it began,
It has come back to me because I just ran.

As I keep on staring at this object,
It's as if looking through me, wanting to resurrect.
It wants to grab me, it wants revenge,
I want to shatter it, I need a syringe.
My world, my everything just minimizes,
And it's as if I'm watching my life in different sizes.

Starting from small to unimportant,
Ending with large to horribly important.
No one's there to save me, not even you,
I just want to laugh and grab you too.
I want to pull in everyone I see walk by,
I want them to see their pain, their cry.

I want them to be a spectator,
See them in third person view, merely a beggar.
I want them to suffer with me, to join me,
I want them to breathe the things I breathe.
I need them to realized they gave up everything,
Everything I wished for, from every human being.

They don't realize how rich they are,
They don't realize what they have is rare.
They're too busy playing make pretend,
Whether they know it or even intend.
They're to blind to see it, till they it loses its fun,
Till they lose everything, themselves, even that someone. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 21 [informant] => KJ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Shattered and Repulsive

Contributed by KJ on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



As I look through this mirror,
I can't help but to have more fear.
This fear has no mercy just one destination,
To destroy what's left in the rest of the nation.
It has come to finish off from where it began,
It has come back to me because I just ran.

As I keep on staring at this object,
It's as if looking through me, wanting to resurrect.
It wants to grab me, it wants revenge,
I want to shatter it, I need a syringe.
My world, my everything just minimizes,
And it's as if I'm watching my life in different sizes.

Starting from small to unimportant,
Ending with large to horribly important.
No one's there to save me, not even you,
I just want to laugh and grab you too.
I want to pull in everyone I see walk by,
I want them to see their pain, their cry.

I want them to be a spectator,
See them in third person view, merely a beggar.
I want them to suffer with me, to join me,
I want them to breathe the things I breathe.
I need them to realized they gave up everything,
Everything I wished for, from every human being.

They don't realize how rich they are,
They don't realize what they have is rare.
They're too busy playing make pretend,
Whether they know it or even intend.
They're to blind to see it, till they it loses its fun,
Till they lose everything, themselves, even that someone.




Copyright © KJ ... [ 2003-08-05 15:05:00]
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Re: Shattered and Repulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 5th August 2003 @ 09:15:28 PM AEST
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i agree.........WOW......very heartfelt...i like the "playing pretend" line!!!!


Re: Shattered and Repulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:36:42 PM AEST
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This was well written although I don't get the over all purpose of the poem. I did like the first stanza about fear however.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Shattered and Repulsive (User Rating: 1 )
by KJ on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 10:21:56 PM AEST
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Basically...when I wrote this it was about how people take everything for granted. Those who don't realize how others...feel more...or they actually recognize more things than others do. Only than do others realize something when it gets taken away...only than they feel what some others feel...not meaning it in a "haha I'm more aware of this and that" just how some people are and are not.

apologies if you still do not get the whole purpose...




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