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Array ( [sid] => 21562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Uncertain [time] => 2003-08-07 04:25:00 [hometext] => Exploring the psyche of a person faced with hopelessness. [bodytext] => A broken tree on a hill
that still lives.
And the flowers even more sweet
the fruits sweeter still.
A broken tree that still lives.

A broken man on a ledge
memories from a broken dream.
And the hopes dashed on a rock bed.
And his heart shattered to pieces still.
He whispered to his ear...
A broken tree can still live.
Yet I am human and know not how to breathe.
Yet I am human and know not how to live.

I stand at the edge
and I begin to feel fear.
I stand at the edge...
Where do I go from here??? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ELPsycho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Uncertain

Contributed by ELPsycho on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A broken tree on a hill
that still lives.
And the flowers even more sweet
the fruits sweeter still.
A broken tree that still lives.

A broken man on a ledge
memories from a broken dream.
And the hopes dashed on a rock bed.
And his heart shattered to pieces still.
He whispered to his ear...
A broken tree can still live.
Yet I am human and know not how to breathe.
Yet I am human and know not how to live.

I stand at the edge
and I begin to feel fear.
I stand at the edge...
Where do I go from here???

Copyright © ELPsycho ... [ 2003-08-07 04:25:00]
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Re: Uncertain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:56:42 AM AEST
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Back.The only place to go...back to give it another try or else back to try the next bend in the road ...or the one after that...and then take a right turn and don't look back.
Your poem was totally fantastic,profound and sad too.
I loved it!
Best wishes always
from
Kay.

Re: Uncertain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:57:07 AM AEST
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Back.The only place to go...back to give it another try or else back to try the next bend in the road ...or the one after that...and then take a right turn and don't look back.
Your poem was totally fantastic,profound and sad too.
I loved it!
Best wishes always
from
Kay p m-devenish

Re: Uncertain (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 04:41:24 PM AEST
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back away..........look away...........make new dreams come true......

Re: Uncertain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:49:07 PM AEST
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Excellent flowing poem, full of feeling and meaning.
There isnt much I can say to change what you feel so I wont.
There is to much darkness in my heart, so what ever I said to make you feel better, may prove false and unkind.
But I know the edge, as inviting as it is is it really the way to go?
Best I can do sorry.

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