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along with any feeling
winter has arrived
far before it was counted upon

a hike up the steep mountain
in the bitterness of the winters' breath
my mind escapes and never returns
after the winds' harsh ravage

the iced lakes seemed more innocent
but their appeal is lessened by the frigid air
it makes me wish i were myself again
but i am no longer familiar with who that is

i need warmth to come again
to recover all of myself
tis only this one thing that can bring it back
tis the only thing saving my soul

for spring i have wished
for to me winter has lied
numbness has arrived
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Necessary Warmth

Contributed by GreenLady89 on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

spring has passed
along with any feeling
winter has arrived
far before it was counted upon

a hike up the steep mountain
in the bitterness of the winters' breath
my mind escapes and never returns
after the winds' harsh ravage

the iced lakes seemed more innocent
but their appeal is lessened by the frigid air
it makes me wish i were myself again
but i am no longer familiar with who that is

i need warmth to come again
to recover all of myself
tis only this one thing that can bring it back
tis the only thing saving my soul

for spring i have wished
for to me winter has lied
numbness has arrived
for my one wish of spring has been denied

Copyright © GreenLady89 ... [ 2003-08-08 01:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Necessary Warmth (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:08:51 AM AEST
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wonderful poem flowing and beautiful.welcome to your poetry. com
michelle

Re: Necessary Warmth (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:32:59 AM AEST
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Nice. I liked it.

Re: Necessary Warmth (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 02:26:17 AM AEST
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brutal and powerful words wrap with sweet coating! Well done.

Re: Necessary Warmth (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:27:15 AM AEST
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A brilliant painting of nature and your emotions. venkat

Re: Necessary Warmth (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Tuesday, 21st October 2003 @ 11:06:50 PM AEST
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Also great. You have a great way of expressing your feelings. I only wish that they were happier feeling. I wish your heart didn't cry.
Wishing for better days,
David

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