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FREE TO BE
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ATTITUDES RUSH ME NOTHING CONSOLES THEE THE PRETTINESS ASIDE MY PERSONALITY HIDES SMILES CROSS PATHS RETURN WITH THEIR WRATH HARD TO BELIEVE NONE TO CLEAVE NEW PRIME SCENT DAYS ARE QUICKLY SPENT NEW DOOR'S FREEDOM VALIDATE THE QUEEN'S KINGDOM FREE TO BE MYSELF JUMPED DOWN FROM THE SHELF DON'T KNOW HOW LONG THERE IS 'FOR I'M TRAPPED AND ONLY HIS CURSE OF THE BITTER DARKNESS THUNDERING TO MY CLOSENESS HEAR MY PLEAS NUMERATE MY FEES LEAVE ME TO BE TO BE ONLY ME NO MORE ROOM FOR TEARS LOCK AWAY MY FEARS LAUGH IN THE FACE OF LEERS DEAFNESS TO THE JEERS WALK PROUD UNSHROUD THE ME THAT IS FREE TO BE.
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 12:02:47 AM AEST (User
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Oh, my dear you are so talented! And I'm the same lady that told you to get out of your box and be you...walk with the truth....no matter what anyone says, but always remember, my dear....if you are different, you will be looked down on! That's because everyone that is judging you would like to be just like you! They are jealous to think you have the courage to hold your head arrect and be true to yourself and those around you!
Wonderful poem...few words with so much meaning. I really enjoyed that have to go back and reread it again.,
lovingcritters
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 12:18:18 AM AEST (User
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i have to be me
who else could i be?
~show them the door
they know not what friends are for
your poem has much meaning
in yourself keep believing
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 03:35:16 AM AEST (User
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Well said..you have a right to live in the light..
and to walk proud unshroud..beautifully writen. venkat |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by gogrl on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:25:09 PM AEST (User
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I understand completely. Very well said and I applaud you for your courage to stand tall and be yourself. I too am in a class of my own but I wouldn't have it any other way. Makes us truly special. gogrl |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by gogrl on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 03:25:34 PM AEST (User
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I understand completely. Very well said and I applaud you for your courage to stand tall and be yourself. I too am in a class of my own but I wouldn't have it any other way. Makes us truly special. gogrl |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:28:13 PM AEST (User
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Awesome... liked your format too!!! |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:28:13 PM AEST (User
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Awesome... liked your format too!!! |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:28:13 PM AEST (User
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Awesome... liked your format too!!! |
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Re: FREE TO BE
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 8th September 2020 @ 07:28:15 PM AEST (User
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Awesome... liked your format too!!! |
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