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Array ( [sid] => 21687 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Who, What, When, Why And How [time] => 2003-08-10 02:35:00 [hometext] => I wrote this a while back, I guess it's Ok now to let everybody read it.

The Phantom [bodytext] => How do you expain a heart filled with pain,
How do you decibe the hurt as you die inside,
How do you close the door on tomarrow,
When everyday is filled with sarrow,

Why are we apart, does the healing ever start,
Why must I write, this pen keeps me up late at night,
Why does my heart bleed, maybe cause your not with me,
Why do I have to cry, I can't control the tears in my eyes,

When will we be together, it seems like forever,
When will the pain stop, I guess when this body drops,
When can I hold you, when will this tour be through,
When will this end, I have a feeling it's only began,

What did I do, to be taken from you,
What was the cause that has my world at a pause,
What keeps me alive, I guess it's your love burning inside,
What makes me tick, I don't know, but me without you makes me sick,

Who can save me, just you and YPDC,
Who really cares, I don't think it's God, or I wouldn't be here,
Who am I, I guess no one will know until I die,
Who can help, I guess nobody but myself.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 6 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Who, What, When, Why And How

Contributed by The_Phantom on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



How do you expain a heart filled with pain,
How do you decibe the hurt as you die inside,
How do you close the door on tomarrow,
When everyday is filled with sarrow,

Why are we apart, does the healing ever start,
Why must I write, this pen keeps me up late at night,
Why does my heart bleed, maybe cause your not with me,
Why do I have to cry, I can't control the tears in my eyes,

When will we be together, it seems like forever,
When will the pain stop, I guess when this body drops,
When can I hold you, when will this tour be through,
When will this end, I have a feeling it's only began,

What did I do, to be taken from you,
What was the cause that has my world at a pause,
What keeps me alive, I guess it's your love burning inside,
What makes me tick, I don't know, but me without you makes me sick,

Who can save me, just you and YPDC,
Who really cares, I don't think it's God, or I wouldn't be here,
Who am I, I guess no one will know until I die,
Who can help, I guess nobody but myself.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




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Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 04:01:38 AM AEST
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i love a piece that uses these questions....really good phantom....really good!!!!!


Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 05:06:18 AM AEST
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Crazy, how we all have different yet like realtionships~! So sad the likeness has to include such pain at times~! Great write and always,
Keep the peace.
Keep your head up.
Keep your dreams.
Keep loving life and it will love you back.
And most of all keep the spirit of a child within your heart.


Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 12:13:33 PM AEST
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as always a very moving write
glad you are back

Shari


Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 07:34:18 PM AEST
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what a heartfelt honest write full of emotion, wow, this line says it all,"What did I do, to be taken from you," hugs n' love, your friend always, nessa


Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by Jilly on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 02:21:09 AM AEST
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WoW!! Very moving...captivated from the first line right to the end... hugs ~Jilly


Re: Who, What, When, Why And How (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 04:29:11 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It is very moving and has a heartfelt meaning.

ShadowsCloud




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