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i can only recall,
your sweet smiles,
your witty talks,
god gave me all,
but,
he didn't give me the real life,
he gave me a simple world without,
the ever circling love,
i found it in you,
i thought we are in ,
the same boat,
later i found out that ,
it is just me,
in a different world.
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in a different love boat

Contributed by maha_ak49 on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

it's all a memory,
i can only recall,
your sweet smiles,
your witty talks,
god gave me all,
but,
he didn't give me the real life,
he gave me a simple world without,
the ever circling love,
i found it in you,
i thought we are in ,
the same boat,
later i found out that ,
it is just me,
in a different world.

Copyright © maha_ak49 ... [ 2003-08-11 07:05:00]
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Re: in a different love boat (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 09:22:44 AM AEST
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Good poem. Right now I can't really grasp the entirety of the meaning, but its probably because I haven't slept in three days and "Destroyer of Senses" won't get out of my head. I like your poem though. I'll have to read it again later after I feed my subconsciousness.

Re: in a different love boat (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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Sweetie I think that is a beautiful poem and we are all in our own worlds to be honest with you. Just remember tomorrow is a new day full of beautiful light that will cast out the darkness of the days past...

Re: in a different love boat (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 12:25:13 AM AEST
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sweetie...........there's light under the door.........lay by the door.....make your wishes and dreams open it and you'll find the way out.....there's waiting arms.....knowing arms on the other side.......
love and peace

Re: in a different love boat (User Rating: 1 )
by soul_je on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 11:56:51 AM AEST
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Nice one. truly captures the pain and beauty of love.

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