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for anyone that cares.
I'm saying good-bye to the rude comments
and all the evil stares.

I am leaving this world today
nobody will know i'm gone
I wish i could figure out
whatever i did wrong.

Please don't grieve over me
it's just a waste of tears
just plan your wonderful life without me
for the next couple years.

I really don't want a funeral
i just want to be left alone
all i really need
is my name written on a stone.

Well i think it's time for me to go
I think you all can tell
but there's a spot for me
and it's waiting for me in hell.

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Good-Bye World

Contributed by pretty_n_pink on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This is a good-bye letter
for anyone that cares.
I'm saying good-bye to the rude comments
and all the evil stares.

I am leaving this world today
nobody will know i'm gone
I wish i could figure out
whatever i did wrong.

Please don't grieve over me
it's just a waste of tears
just plan your wonderful life without me
for the next couple years.

I really don't want a funeral
i just want to be left alone
all i really need
is my name written on a stone.

Well i think it's time for me to go
I think you all can tell
but there's a spot for me
and it's waiting for me in hell.

Copyright © pretty_n_pink ... [ 2003-08-12 01:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Good-Bye World (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie-Kate on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 07:12:50 AM AEST
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It's really sad to think that no one cares if you live or die. someone always does though. awesome write, i loved it

Re: Good-Bye World (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 08:03:58 AM AEST
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really a great write... you showed your emotions, had a great rhythm, and you showed what you really felt....

i just hope that its not true... :(

Re: Good-Bye World (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 14th August 2003 @ 09:30:23 PM AEST
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This is a good write and I too hope this is not true. Stay well. Good luck!!!
Saira

Re: Good-Bye World (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:58:01 PM AEST
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I hope this isnt true, ***** lame'os
Good write nice rhyme see you when we get there

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